Reviews from

Hungry Henry

Eating the wrong food at the wrong time

5 total reviews 
Comment from Judy Couch
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You met the requirements of the prompt well. Your poem is fun to read and amusing. It also carries a message that if a person wants to be healthy, he needs to heed his diet. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
    Thank you
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You meet the contest requirements nicely with this well penned piece. Oh what a shame to trade heavenly Hawaii for hellish hospital. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
    Thank you
Comment from Trybuck
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hungry Henry has his hairy hands holding his hamburger. He honestly honed his hook honorably. Hip - Hip Hooray, Hip Hip Hooray, Huck(Buck)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
    Thank you
Comment from gypsymoth
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Well, no one can say you didn't do everything right. Like it or not, it was perfect. Good Luck in the contest.

Gypsymoth

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
    Thank you
Comment from Charlene0513
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You have correctly and gone all out in expressing the good use of alliteration.
Needless to say, those hamburgers sure won't help that waistline of yours.
Charlene

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
    Thank you