Witch-(5-7-5)
on Halloween night5 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
Your poem meets the requirements of the prompt well. The picture enhances it perfectly but isn't necessary for it to make sense. Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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Your poem meets the requirements of the prompt well. The picture enhances it perfectly but isn't necessary for it to make sense. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a wonderful entry which follows the requirements nicely. I like your creative twist to focus on the essence of the witch to get your message across. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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This is a wonderful entry which follows the requirements nicely. I like your creative twist to focus on the essence of the witch to get your message across. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, and she's a beaut, isn't she?
I love all things Halloween. I happens to be my favorite holiday of the year; my on personal "Christmas", if you will. Christmas is the best as far as getting the family all together, but Halloween really gets my motor runnin' at full speed ahead.
Your poem portraying a wicked witch is a perfect entry for this contest.
I wish you the best of luck. :}
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Yeah, and she's a beaut, isn't she?
I love all things Halloween. I happens to be my favorite holiday of the year; my on personal "Christmas", if you will. Christmas is the best as far as getting the family all together, but Halloween really gets my motor runnin' at full speed ahead.
Your poem portraying a wicked witch is a perfect entry for this contest.
I wish you the best of luck. :}
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you
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Sure. :}
Comment from kiwisteveh
cackling, eerie, hideous - all strong words, add to the power of this short piece. The cackling line also presents the aural image which is at the heart of the 5-7-5 poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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cackling, eerie, hideous - all strong words, add to the power of this short piece. The cackling line also presents the aural image which is at the heart of the 5-7-5 poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from dragonpoet
Picture is perfect for Halloween which is coming up soon and a good illustration for the words. You can almost hear the sound of the witch's laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Picture is perfect for Halloween which is coming up soon and a good illustration for the words. You can almost hear the sound of the witch's laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet