Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

you follow the contest prompt

your syllable count spot on

your few words portray the flow of water but you want the sun to shine

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014

Thank you very much. I appreciate your time.

reply by Smoothiecool on 14-Sep-2014

most welcome..SC

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

A very creative approach to this waterfall prompt with an appropriate image as well to tell the story of your haiku. I like that you added the author notes as well. Great job! Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014

Thank you very much. Thank you for sponsoring this contest. It was interesting and fun.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a spot on syllable count and excellent imagery. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014

I appreciate you taking the time to review my poem. Thank you.

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Nice. Great cross reference "hippie" thing in the last line. True to form and a nice spiritual element to the write. Good luck with the prompt. A worthy entry.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014

Thank you. It was fun to write. I appreciate your time reviewing my poem.

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

Will someone please help
Poor Aquarius stand straight
No waterfall needed

Nice artwork to go with your well written haiku. Hope it does well, Buck

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014

Thank you very much. Thanks for you time.