haiku (worker bees busy)
nice tasty honey4 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
worker bees busy
making sweet honey for their
Queen bee in her hive.
How faithful are her subjects making honey for her and for all of us.
Perfect syllable count for the structure
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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worker bees busy
making sweet honey for their
Queen bee in her hive.
How faithful are her subjects making honey for her and for all of us.
Perfect syllable count for the structure
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Angel Debbie
worker bees busy
making sweet honey for their
Queen bee in her hive.
Such a great treat these bees make. One of my favorite treats Honey on Peanut butter toast!.
Great Haiku. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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worker bees busy
making sweet honey for their
Queen bee in her hive.
Such a great treat these bees make. One of my favorite treats Honey on Peanut butter toast!.
Great Haiku. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Good one! I have read so many of these so far, and there are a lot of good ones out there, but I especially like this one! (I am a huge honey lover!!)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Good one! I have read so many of these so far, and there are a lot of good ones out there, but I especially like this one! (I am a huge honey lover!!)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from rrabinow
I like the line worker bees busy. Great alliteration with that line. Great use of descriptive words. I like your aha moment. Great picture. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I like the line worker bees busy. Great alliteration with that line. Great use of descriptive words. I like your aha moment. Great picture. Best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you