Bountiful Spring
trees + flowers = Eden7 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
bright flowers flourish
amidst the white-barked birches
glen awash in charm
Good use of alliteration
perfect 5-7-5 syllable count tat satisfies the requirement of the prompt
all the best in the contest
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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bright flowers flourish
amidst the white-barked birches
glen awash in charm
Good use of alliteration
perfect 5-7-5 syllable count tat satisfies the requirement of the prompt
all the best in the contest
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback and best wishes.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
yes colourful flowers amongst white birches would be a magnificent wash of beauty
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
yes colourful flowers amongst white birches would be a magnificent wash of beauty
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you for your fine feedback and best wishes.
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most welcome..SC
Comment from Connie C
What beautiful imagery you've painted with your poem and what a beautiful picture you chose to accompany this. My best to you in the contest.
Connie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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What beautiful imagery you've painted with your poem and what a beautiful picture you chose to accompany this. My best to you in the contest.
Connie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Connie, for your kind praise and best wishes.
Comment from l.raven
if they don't stop cutting trees down....putting up stinking parking lots...there going to find out your soon what they are here for...very well written and a great picture...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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if they don't stop cutting trees down....putting up stinking parking lots...there going to find out your soon what they are here for...very well written and a great picture...
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you for a most encouraging review.
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you are so welcome...luff
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you are so welcome...luff
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a charming 5-7-5 that captures the beauty of the trees and flowers in the springtime. The form and syllable count meet the requirements of the prompt. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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This is a charming 5-7-5 that captures the beauty of the trees and flowers in the springtime. The form and syllable count meet the requirements of the prompt. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Jeanie, for your kind praise and best wishes.
Comment from kiwijenny
bright flowers flourish
amidst the white-barked birches
glen awash in charm
Glen is indeed awash in charm.....I think birch trees are beautiful...a peeling
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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bright flowers flourish
amidst the white-barked birches
glen awash in charm
Glen is indeed awash in charm.....I think birch trees are beautiful...a peeling
God bless
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you for your kind feedback.
Comment from Llewellyn2012
Ah, spring captured in its most beautiful form, but also in as few words as possible. Good luck in the contest! That's a great picture to boot.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Ah, spring captured in its most beautiful form, but also in as few words as possible. Good luck in the contest! That's a great picture to boot.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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So pleased you enjoyed my choice of words and the picture. Thank you for your review.