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The effect word have is powerful

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Comment from Hadria
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This is another new one for me! and its effect on me is profound. So clever, to say so much, in so few word, about words. I really like it, and the art work is also clever, the books leading upward like a staircase. Very well done, Mary.

I think I sent my last reply to you too soon - I was so cress with myself for the mistake! I meant to say that Dean Kuchs gave me very helpful advice about putting in more than one photo. Hadria

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    GReat Haria, If it is possible to send the info to me I would love to be able to do it. Also I notice Dean uses a different size font as well. Mary
Comment from Domino 2
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They often DO 'have a profound effect on us', Mary, whether bad or good, though of course many are shallow and meaningless, and best ignored - especially if offensive or pompous.

I really like your 1st line to describe words.

Best wishes, Ray


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks ray for the best wishes and the review. Mary
Comment from krys123
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Mary, Me the words that you write in poetry are definitely a mechanic transport that effect us in many different ways.
I enjoyed reading your piece of writing very much for it is very profound and provocative. Thank you so much for sharing am posting this where everyone at May the Lord be with you always Mary.
Alex

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Alex for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
reply by krys123 on 10-Jun-2014
    You are so sincerely welcome my friend
Comment from tbacha58
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What kind of sensations, emotional impressions,
do words have in common?
They are vehicles to determine
their profound effect on us.

Whoa, a very strong poem, few words, but immense knowledge. Good luck for the contest. I also liked the picture. Well done. Love Terry xoxo




 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Terry for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Mary:)
What a powerful truism your twenty-one word impart to me. I am sending you love and Irish Hugs for good luck in the contest.

Roger

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Rogerfor your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
Comment from maggieadams
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Nice metaphor in this Katie 21, using vehicle to drive the power words have on all of us. Words can run one over or stop us in midstream. As writers, we hope to drive people with our words and evoke emotions and provoke thought.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Maggie for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
Comment from RGstar
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Well incorporated. Good wording and spot on for structure. And how important they are, and what would we do without them?

A nice delivery. Have a great day. Best wishes.
RG.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Ef for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
Comment from DanielEkine
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Thanks for giving me my first novel smile this morning. Always a pleasure to be in the presence of your creation.
The presentation is remarkable.
The words are happy to relate to your reader.
I am but a humble admirer.
"What kind of sensations, emotional impressions,
do words have in common?

They are vehicles to determine
their profound effect on us."

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Daniel for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary
Comment from Dean Kuch
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That they are, Jackarrie, and based upon your poetic prowess, you know that about as well as anyone, I think.

An excellent, well written entry for this contest. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Dean for your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, I appreciate your comments Mary
Comment from Debra White
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Hi Mary :) Thank you for entering the contest. I enjoyed your Katie21 poem. A great way of looking at words... Correct word count and lovely presentation make for a really nice entry! Good luck in the booth... Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thanks Debrafor your review and comments on my Katie 21 poem, Mary