The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "5-7-5 give me a hand"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
10 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
A zombie with one hand meets his matching zombie with no hands. The first zombie will not get to have another hand form this handless friend, lol.
Good humor and best wishes.
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
A zombie with one hand meets his matching zombie with no hands. The first zombie will not get to have another hand form this handless friend, lol.
Good humor and best wishes.
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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I didn't win but it was fun, it was my first Zombie write and as you know I don't believe a word of it.... It is appointed unto man, once to die, and after that, the judgement.
Thanks for your fun comments.
Love, Carolyn
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This fun write is like the Duet Poem i wrote with Gert Sherwood called "Two Poets Joking", smiles.
Cheerio, bro Ritchie. :))
Comment from casini
Oh! Really a scary poem with a scary picture. If you change the picture the thought will carry a completely different meaning. Just like you are ready handicapped and asking help from one who is doubly handicapped and at the end you showed your sympathy( just my suggestion only). Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2014
Oh! Really a scary poem with a scary picture. If you change the picture the thought will carry a completely different meaning. Just like you are ready handicapped and asking help from one who is doubly handicapped and at the end you showed your sympathy( just my suggestion only). Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 15-May-2014
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I am not usually into Zombies.lol but decided on a whim to write this. It was kind of creepy . Thanks for your comments and generous rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
Give me a hand, indeed thst's a very spooky 5/7/5 poem,
thanks for sharing it.Good luck at the contest.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
Give me a hand, indeed thst's a very spooky 5/7/5 poem,
thanks for sharing it.Good luck at the contest.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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I didn't win but it was fun. I had never written a Zombie poem before. Thanks Lakeport, :-) Carolyn
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport,
Comment from Riss Ryker518
This was funny! Good to see a little humor on the topic of zombies. Maybe some punctuation would have worked a little better?
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
This was funny! Good to see a little humor on the topic of zombies. Maybe some punctuation would have worked a little better?
Comment Written 13-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed this one, it was my first Zombie poem, not my usual style. But it was fun to challenge my brain. LOL :-) Carolyn
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I have a gun. If a zombie apocalypse happens I'm gonna run like hell, shoot and run to a Sam's Club because you need a card to get in there and there's enough food to eat for a lifetime :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
I have a gun. If a zombie apocalypse happens I'm gonna run like hell, shoot and run to a Sam's Club because you need a card to get in there and there's enough food to eat for a lifetime :)
Comment Written 13-May-2014
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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How funny, I love your review. I have never written a zombie anything, but I am having fun with this one. I am entering contest this month, just for fun....:-)
Comment from Leineco
LOL - Oh, the bane of being a Zombie! Just when you need a hand, you discover your buddy already gave at the office! (Moving day is gonna be a bitch!)
Cute write :-)
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
LOL - Oh, the bane of being a Zombie! Just when you need a hand, you discover your buddy already gave at the office! (Moving day is gonna be a bitch!)
Cute write :-)
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thanks for the fun comments...
Comment from LIJ Red
Well, it's gory enough-and a 575-fits the requirements. Was it a zombie or a leper who greeted his pal, "Haven't seen much of you around, lately."?
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
Well, it's gory enough-and a 575-fits the requirements. Was it a zombie or a leper who greeted his pal, "Haven't seen much of you around, lately."?
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Hahaha... thanks for a great review. :-)
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the humor. That is one thing us humans can count on. The zombies will fall apart before they get to us. Great work.
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the humor. That is one thing us humans can count on. The zombies will fall apart before they get to us. Great work.
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thanks nelliesellie, I love your review.
Comment from rouskin
Give me a hand friend One of mine fell off today Oh, both yours are gone... Looks like a winner to me and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
Give me a hand friend One of mine fell off today Oh, both yours are gone... Looks like a winner to me and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thanks so much for your comments and vote. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from adewpearl
Terrific pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I love the literal take on the figurative expression - give me a hand - made me laugh out loud :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
Terrific pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I love the literal take on the figurative expression - give me a hand - made me laugh out loud :-) Brooke
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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So glad you enjoyed this one....it is my first zoooooooooobie poem.
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That puts you one zombie poem ahead of me LOL