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Showering when dogs play up(5-7-5)

I think my dad's dogs may have thought it was a joke

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Comment from barleygirl
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This must be referring to the dog's version of flushing the toilet while someone's in the shower, to deliver a shot of scalding hot. This is witty & fun & easy to visualize even without an illustration. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Funny scenario. What was this person hoping for at the door, to go to answer it in just a towel or maybe nude.

Fitting artwork.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by dragonpoet on 20-Mar-2014
    Any time.

    dragonpoet
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Never freakin' fails, does it? You can go al-l-llllll day long, and no one calls, no one come to visit. But, as soon as you get your butt in the shower, DING-D0-0-0-o-o-ong! Oh crap, it's the door bell!

Murphy's Law, I suppose, or bad karma.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by Dean Kuch on 19-Mar-2014
    Yep, not a problem.
Comment from lancellot
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Oh, I hate when that happens, also the phone. You run for it, only to some lame telemarketer. Interesting piece. I think many readers will relate to this little slice of life.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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    Thank you