Pulling In All the Props
desperation cuteness10 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very funny, cute illustration and text for this entry.
Undoubtedly, FS members will be enticed to read your posting based on your illustration alone.
It is a joyful read for sure!
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Very funny, cute illustration and text for this entry.
Undoubtedly, FS members will be enticed to read your posting based on your illustration alone.
It is a joyful read for sure!
Mark
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you~
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh my - that poor little "love tool" - dressed like that - but anything to please. Very cute - especially those small dogs who really have no choice when you pick them up and say "here, wear this." - We have a small dog also - he is amiable.
Cute poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Oh my - that poor little "love tool" - dressed like that - but anything to please. Very cute - especially those small dogs who really have no choice when you pick them up and say "here, wear this." - We have a small dog also - he is amiable.
Cute poem.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
How cute the puppy dressed up! He doesn't look foolish, he's too cute. Good luck on your contest the puppy is helping you to win!
"Keep right on writing!"
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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How cute the puppy dressed up! He doesn't look foolish, he's too cute. Good luck on your contest the puppy is helping you to win!
"Keep right on writing!"
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the lover that will do anything to impress his date, and hope she will find him acceptable with all the stunts and props he applied.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the lover that will do anything to impress his date, and hope she will find him acceptable with all the stunts and props he applied.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a hilariously precious little pup whose owner has not been nice to him at all.... he looks more like the mouse than the elephant! ;) A fun 5-7-5 for the contest -- hope you did well! ;) :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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What a hilariously precious little pup whose owner has not been nice to him at all.... he looks more like the mouse than the elephant! ;) A fun 5-7-5 for the contest -- hope you did well! ;) :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from adewpearl
sure/an/y/thing/so/you/can/win - this middle line is 8 syllables
great pairing of photo and poem
I like the fool/tool pairing
most amusing :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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sure/an/y/thing/so/you/can/win - this middle line is 8 syllables
great pairing of photo and poem
I like the fool/tool pairing
most amusing :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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:)Thanks, Brooke...
Comment from barleygirl
This is adorable & fun, delivering a true slice of life with many obedient pets (not mine, tho). This poem might not be the same without the photo, however, so it could be stronger if the words delivered everything we need to know to "get it". Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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This is adorable & fun, delivering a true slice of life with many obedient pets (not mine, tho). This poem might not be the same without the photo, however, so it could be stronger if the words delivered everything we need to know to "get it". Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from daniela.albu
A sweet, inspiring animal poem. The illustration is awesome. You managed to convey a strong message in so few words. This poem should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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A sweet, inspiring animal poem. The illustration is awesome. You managed to convey a strong message in so few words. This poem should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much! Appreciated!
Comment from country ranch writer
poor puppy playing the game with you of why me ,why do I have to wear this stupid thing mom why why is it so importand that I wear this get up
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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poor puppy playing the game with you of why me ,why do I have to wear this stupid thing mom why why is it so importand that I wear this get up
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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LOL Thanks...
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WELCOME
Comment from DonandVicki
Quite the court Jester. I like the cuteness of the poetic verse that you created. The 5-7-5 is in good construction. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Quite the court Jester. I like the cuteness of the poetic verse that you created. The 5-7-5 is in good construction. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you!