senryu piggy has new name
pig changes his name19 total reviews
Comment from emjaihammond
Cute and Clever! I thought this one was very cute and I love the joke in your 5-7-5. It is a cute entry in the contest. Loved the way you use words and phrases. Nice work.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Cute and Clever! I thought this one was very cute and I love the joke in your 5-7-5. It is a cute entry in the contest. Loved the way you use words and phrases. Nice work.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much!,
Comment from w.j.debi
You made me chuckle so that must mean you complied with the prompt rules. It is a witty poem. Silly pig. You have selected an adorable picture to compliment your work.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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You made me chuckle so that must mean you complied with the prompt rules. It is a witty poem. Silly pig. You have selected an adorable picture to compliment your work.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Hee hee....sometimes a girl just has to write about a pig. ; o). Thanks so much!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very clever! This is a good idea you had. How could a pig live with the name Bologna hanging over his head - do pigs know their destiny LOL. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
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Very clever! This is a good idea you had. How could a pig live with the name Bologna hanging over his head - do pigs know their destiny LOL. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from barleygirl
Your short poem is a bit cryptic for me. I'm thinking "bologna" as in "nonsense" . . . compared to "cheese" as in "smile" (taking a photo). That's all I could come up with! It's definitely witty & original! Thanks for sharing.
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Your short poem is a bit cryptic for me. I'm thinking "bologna" as in "nonsense" . . . compared to "cheese" as in "smile" (taking a photo). That's all I could come up with! It's definitely witty & original! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from ennahanid
That is one funny looking pig there and I have to admit that Cheese is a slightly kinder name than Bologna. Made me chuckle and I wish you luck with this entry - Dinah
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That is one funny looking pig there and I have to admit that Cheese is a slightly kinder name than Bologna. Made me chuckle and I wish you luck with this entry - Dinah
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from daniela.albu
It has humor but it is not quite a poem. It has a witty remark but does not convince the reader since it does not convey much of a message.
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It has humor but it is not quite a poem. It has a witty remark but does not convince the reader since it does not convey much of a message.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
pig named bologna
thought the name was so unkind
he took the name cheese
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is spot on. Good alliteration with thought/the. Clear message that is short, simple and humorous.
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pig named bologna
thought the name was so unkind
he took the name cheese
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is spot on. Good alliteration with thought/the. Clear message that is short, simple and humorous.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from mfowler
Your pictured pig looks exactly like cheese. I would change my name to chees if I was called Bologna. This is just silly enough to do well in this contest, which is about silliness and animals. Good luck!
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Your pictured pig looks exactly like cheese. I would change my name to chees if I was called Bologna. This is just silly enough to do well in this contest, which is about silliness and animals. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from skye
pig named Bologna
thought the name was so unkind
he took the name Cheese
How funny. This is very clever, changing names, just like we try to change who we are, when in reality, we are just the same.
Excellent.
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pig named Bologna
thought the name was so unkind
he took the name Cheese
How funny. This is very clever, changing names, just like we try to change who we are, when in reality, we are just the same.
Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a clever and unusual poem for the witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Imagine a pig with that much sensitivity! Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a clever and unusual poem for the witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Imagine a pig with that much sensitivity! Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014