Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

Ha ha It's the old "gone fishing" trick. This really is a good one. I also really liked the illustration that went with it. I liked this one a lot.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. It was a fun prompt, cheers

Comment from daniela.albu

Excellent

A good poem with fine rhyme and an inspiring illustration. It should have chances in the contest. The words are chosen with care to obtain rythm, movement and colour.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review Daniela

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

old angler fish waits cleverly dangles the bait a chore that he hates Witty fish indeed Good luck with this lovely read Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is very witty! Your 5-7-5 poem is written with the correct syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review