Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Love it. A very clever write. Good luck with the contest. I seriously doubt than anyone will better this. "I herd ewe wildebeest..." Classic :0) Cheers - DJ

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thank you! I forgot what won but it was a play on words. I don't know if anyone reads all the entries. I thought it would do better ;) its like a lottery with prompts ya know? Thank you though DJ!

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A cute interplay with the words in your verse. The photograph is a cute one that enhances your poem. A very good composition. Don and Vicki

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks Don and Vicki! I'm glad you liked this fun little one. This is the opposite of what I usually write...

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

I liked your play on words, the picture fits the poem very well. Good luck in the contest. Very witty and I'm not lion. :) Terrie

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Haha thanks so much Terrie! :)