Counting Stars
What you should never do26 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
Just having dreams, interests if you will, is everything. Shakespeare, something about, "Without dreams, what is a heaven for?" I'm sure the quote is not correct but sentiment is there.
Good luck and best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Just having dreams, interests if you will, is everything. Shakespeare, something about, "Without dreams, what is a heaven for?" I'm sure the quote is not correct but sentiment is there.
Good luck and best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. That is a great quote.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Patti R.
Ha, I got a chuckle out of this one! And let me add: Never say Never! Excellent entry with this poem. Perfect syllable count - good luck to you. We can get a bit caught up in counting the (red) stars, can't we?
Patti
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Ha, I got a chuckle out of this one! And let me add: Never say Never! Excellent entry with this poem. Perfect syllable count - good luck to you. We can get a bit caught up in counting the (red) stars, can't we?
Patti
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Patti. Yes, sometimes we can.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I agree. Do not count red stars. They are dying stars. Always try to follow your dreams. Us what others say to help you. Do not let them deter you. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I love the picture. I agree. Do not count red stars. They are dying stars. Always try to follow your dreams. Us what others say to help you. Do not let them deter you. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from rouskin
Never stop writing Never give up on your dreams Never count red stars Good advice and excellent artwork I wish you all the best in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Never stop writing Never give up on your dreams Never count red stars Good advice and excellent artwork I wish you all the best in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Rouskin.
Comment from write hand blue
An appropriate picture of a stylistic sun.
It took a moment before the penny dropped and I realised that you were taking about Fanstory red stars.
I like the presentation. There are three pieces of wisdom in this work.
Good poem. :) mel.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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An appropriate picture of a stylistic sun.
It took a moment before the penny dropped and I realised that you were taking about Fanstory red stars.
I like the presentation. There are three pieces of wisdom in this work.
Good poem. :) mel.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have all the correct line and syllable count
you allow the reader to see and feel that one should never stop writing or give up your dreams just because you don't get the star you wished for
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have all the correct line and syllable count
you allow the reader to see and feel that one should never stop writing or give up your dreams just because you don't get the star you wished for
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
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welcome..SC
Comment from barleygirl
Thank you very much. This poem is a great message to all writers on this website. The last line is cryptic as you anticipated & you gave us the perfect hint in your notes. Good job & good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. This poem is a great message to all writers on this website. The last line is cryptic as you anticipated & you gave us the perfect hint in your notes. Good job & good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Glasstruth
Failure should inspire one's improvement. I hear it is success that's hard to deal with. Excellent advice. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Failure should inspire one's improvement. I hear it is success that's hard to deal with. Excellent advice. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Like the stars you get for your poems don't mean anything because sometimes people have their own retarded star rating thing and give you low ratings even if your poem is fine because they just didn't like your style. Gah! I hate them. Sorry, rant over. But you're right. We need not focus on the stars and focus on what we do best and that's write
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Like the stars you get for your poems don't mean anything because sometimes people have their own retarded star rating thing and give you low ratings even if your poem is fine because they just didn't like your style. Gah! I hate them. Sorry, rant over. But you're right. We need not focus on the stars and focus on what we do best and that's write
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from l.raven
Very clever and very well written...and you are so right never give up on your dreams....reach for those stars...LOL..a great write...
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Very clever and very well written...and you are so right never give up on your dreams....reach for those stars...LOL..a great write...
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
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you are so welcome...luff