Broken Umbrella-(5-7-5)
Feeling self-conscious struggling with your umbrella8 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I have had that happen to me. I was so mad, I threw the umbrella and stomped off in the rain. The rain hit me and turned to steam. I was that hot. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I have had that happen to me. I was so mad, I threw the umbrella and stomped off in the rain. The rain hit me and turned to steam. I was that hot. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Comment from rouskin
On a windy day umbrella turns inside out as it starts to rain Perfect pairing of poem and picture I wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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On a windy day umbrella turns inside out as it starts to rain Perfect pairing of poem and picture I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Comment from write hand blue
A dramatic cartoon illustrates a simple message.
We've all had this happen and of course it will start to rain.
Good poem.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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A dramatic cartoon illustrates a simple message.
We've all had this happen and of course it will start to rain.
Good poem.
:) mel.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have the correct line and syllable count
yeh..don't you just hate that
when it starts to rain on a windy day your umbrella blows inside out
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have the correct line and syllable count
yeh..don't you just hate that
when it starts to rain on a windy day your umbrella blows inside out
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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welcome..SC
Comment from DonandVicki
Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Comment from harmony13
Excellent 5-7-5 contest entry! The first two lines flowed and connected well. The last line says it all! The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent 5-7-5 contest entry! The first two lines flowed and connected well. The last line says it all! The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Comment from Domino 2
Isn't that always the way, mystery writer?
By the time we've turned the brolly back as it should be, we're already soaked.
I wish I could come up with a solution and patent it - I'd be a billionaire. :-)
Good luck with this great fun entry, Ted
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Isn't that always the way, mystery writer?
By the time we've turned the brolly back as it should be, we're already soaked.
I wish I could come up with a solution and patent it - I'd be a billionaire. :-)
Good luck with this great fun entry, Ted
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Comment from in777wr#
This was a very funny poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. I hate it when the umbrella turns inside out. LOL. The last line concludes the poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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This was a very funny poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. I hate it when the umbrella turns inside out. LOL. The last line concludes the poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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You're welcome.