Comment from l.raven

Excellent

these are so pretty...I love the way they go up in the front yard at my sons house...they remind me Easter is on the way...not sure this year...a lot of now...I love your poem and a beautiful picture...well written

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Raven. :)

reply by l.raven on 01-Feb-2014

you are so very welcome...xxoo

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

A sure sign that spring is on its way and the gift to celebrate in the resurrected Christ at Easter time.
Nice flow and imagery.
Charlene

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Charlene, thank you ever so much. :)

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

I am patiently awaiting to see these lovely symbols of spring;
A pretty picture--a well-penned haiku to complement a bold vision of spring.
Yellow--always a favored color to represent happiness as it brightens our planet.
Excellent!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Capricorn, thank you so very very much. :)

reply by Capricorn30 on 01-Feb-2014

You're welcome:)
A pleasure to read.

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

yellow daffodils brighten the meadow below valley of sunshine Excellent picture and well penned poem Strong contestant Best of luck

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you ever so much. :)

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

yellow daffodils
brighten the meadow below
valley of sunshine

A great write and wonderful description of the valley of sunshine.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Gungalo. :)

reply by Gungalo on 01-Feb-2014

Smile

Comment from maggieadams

Excellent

I love daffodils, they are happy flowers. Another wonderful thing about daffodils is that they multiply every year. Every bulb planted will double or triple adding to the valley of sunshine. Great poem.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Maggie. My mom always had daffodils, too. My poor yard is totally bare, not one flower anywhere. Well maybe a dandelion here and there when it's not cold. LOL. Again, thank you. :)

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Daffodils are a favorite of mine, they make the early spring beds come alive with their smiling faces. A true valley of sunshine. Good luck, Carolyn

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so very very much, Carolyn. :)

Comment from queenv

Excellent

Beautiful and colorful. Flowers are beautiful and the sunny daffodils are one of my favorites. The picture reflects the words of the poem.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you ever so much, Queenv! :)

Comment from kleck140

Excellent

Well written and great message about the beauty
of the daffodils. the bright yellow of the
daffodil is truly a valley of sunshine. My yard
is in blossom in spring with many daffodils.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thank you ever so much, Kleck. :)

reply by kleck140 on 01-Feb-2014

Thanks for your quick response!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

gorgeous presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
you create such a pretty picture
brighten is the perfect mood-creating verb
and your satori line adds to the upbeat tone :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thank you so very very much, Brooke. :)