Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

This poem is neat and clean except some minor break
that needs to be addressed. It rhymes and sings -- a rhythm that is cool. However, the third line, the word "your" is out of phase. The connotation is different from the words, "you are" which, I suppose, the writer meant to be.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thanks for the feed back and taking the time to read and review I will make the correction needed to improve my writing. Blessings
Sandy

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is a precious poem........
Thank you for describing friendship in such a great way
I have a friend like that too....and my husband and kids are close friends too...well done
God bless

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you for your review and comments,My husband and children are close friends of mine to,But every one should have one best friend like ours,Have a bless day.Sandy