Hues of Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Senryu(vivid perspectives)"Senryu Collection
8 total reviews
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Anupam,
Loved the thought that sharing still offers one of the best ways to exchange ideas in this world...our wisdom is gained by our combination of experiences and the experiences of others. Nice insights portrayed in this work, well done. Have a great evening, Bill
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Hello Anupam,
Loved the thought that sharing still offers one of the best ways to exchange ideas in this world...our wisdom is gained by our combination of experiences and the experiences of others. Nice insights portrayed in this work, well done. Have a great evening, Bill
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Hi,
Thank you for your insightful review and comments. Much appreciated as always. So glad you enjoyed it.
Anupam
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable to convey the theme of self-examination and how it often is encouraged by the thoughts and words of others.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
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You have made effective use of every syllable to convey the theme of self-examination and how it often is encouraged by the thoughts and words of others.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
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Thank you for this positive review! :)
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
how your words tells it all. one can learn in many ways.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
how your words tells it all. one can learn in many ways.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thanks! :)
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Comment from ronnie k
YES, the look and more important the exchange of ireas, ideology of the a group gives a look inside, it did or me as I listened to other share and was constantly reminded that " each one teaches one "
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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YES, the look and more important the exchange of ireas, ideology of the a group gives a look inside, it did or me as I listened to other share and was constantly reminded that " each one teaches one "
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you! :)
Comment from rama devi
Nice one. Wise and insightful. Nice alliteration. Good aphoristic style. Superb word economy. A tasteful and striking presentation with chosen artwork enhancing the words and vice versa.
Namaste,
rd
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Nice one. Wise and insightful. Nice alliteration. Good aphoristic style. Superb word economy. A tasteful and striking presentation with chosen artwork enhancing the words and vice versa.
Namaste,
rd
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for this lovely review! :)
Delighted you like it and pleased to have you back as a premier member.
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*thanks* :-))
Comment from SueZen
Vivid perspectives (perception ?) indeed can change your mind to look beyond
its conditioning & lead to self-exploration = going within.
Many doors & windows there to open, explore & encounter wisdom
ours to learn from. Thank you for sharing your perspective poem...
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Vivid perspectives (perception ?) indeed can change your mind to look beyond
its conditioning & lead to self-exploration = going within.
Many doors & windows there to open, explore & encounter wisdom
ours to learn from. Thank you for sharing your perspective poem...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for this lovely review! :)
I appreciate your comments.
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My pleasure Dear Anupam, welcome, Love Sue x
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful senyru. Your words are philosophical and offer a wonderful thought that the insights of others can be helpful in understanding oneself. Nice alliterative sound with "windows of wisdom" and those words are well chosen to convey your thought. Syllable count is correct and the presentation is lovely. judi
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Beautiful senyru. Your words are philosophical and offer a wonderful thought that the insights of others can be helpful in understanding oneself. Nice alliterative sound with "windows of wisdom" and those words are well chosen to convey your thought. Syllable count is correct and the presentation is lovely. judi
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Hi,
so pleased you could connect to it. I like these forms very much.
Thank you so much for this lovely review! :)
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You're so welcome. It isn't easy to get a thought across in 17 syllables, but you're excellent at doing it. judi
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You're so welcome. May the New Year bring you much success with your writing. judi
Comment from Allblockout
To go forward in life we have to do a lot exploring of our own selves to get the wisdom we need to go through this thing we call life,Great poem :)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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To go forward in life we have to do a lot exploring of our own selves to get the wisdom we need to go through this thing we call life,Great poem :)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it.
Have a great day! :)
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You are very welcome :)