Attitude
It all begins and ends with me26 total reviews
Comment from SimplyaStudent
What a cute poem! I really enjoy the nonet style and this one I found was very enjoyable. My cat used to think that way as well... thank you for the kind review.:-)SS
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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What a cute poem! I really enjoy the nonet style and this one I found was very enjoyable. My cat used to think that way as well... thank you for the kind review.:-)SS
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you or reviewing.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great here and the words.
Cats are very clever when they want something
They use their charm in a big way to get what they want.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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The art work is really great here and the words.
Cats are very clever when they want something
They use their charm in a big way to get what they want.
Honey tree
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. may cats sure do have attitude.
Comment from Gungalo
An attitude is autonomous
Confused not with synonymous
Never is anonymous
Only I can change it
Or rearrange it
trade scowl for smile
On any
Given
Day.
Yes that is true and you control the outcome. Sigh on any given day. Wonderful Nonet. Correct syllable count.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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An attitude is autonomous
Confused not with synonymous
Never is anonymous
Only I can change it
Or rearrange it
trade scowl for smile
On any
Given
Day.
Yes that is true and you control the outcome. Sigh on any given day. Wonderful Nonet. Correct syllable count.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the only thing we have any control over.
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Smile.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting poem. I like the rhyming you have in this piece. The word choice is thought-provoking. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This is a very interesting poem. I like the rhyming you have in this piece. The word choice is thought-provoking. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. Glad you found it interesting.
Comment from MagKing
You did very well with this piece, and I think you could go very far. I can see your hand work with the end rhymes.
A great piece you've got there.
Good luck in the contest
MagKing
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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You did very well with this piece, and I think you could go very far. I can see your hand work with the end rhymes.
A great piece you've got there.
Good luck in the contest
MagKing
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I enjoyed your nonet dissertation on attitude . The finicky feline is the perfect symbol. Good luck in the contest. I certainly liked it. :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I enjoyed your nonet dissertation on attitude . The finicky feline is the perfect symbol. Good luck in the contest. I certainly liked it. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from kiwijenny
We had a cat named Blackie who looked identical to your picture
She had attitude in spades......you are right all we can change is our attitude to things
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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We had a cat named Blackie who looked identical to your picture
She had attitude in spades......you are right all we can change is our attitude to things
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for taking time to review.
Comment from adewpearl
Gorgeous presentation of your poem, which is in great syllable count for the nonet
I love the opening rhymes and the flow created by the multi-syllable words
nice alliteration in scowl for smile
You deliver a meaningful message in excellent nonet form.
Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Gorgeous presentation of your poem, which is in great syllable count for the nonet
I love the opening rhymes and the flow created by the multi-syllable words
nice alliteration in scowl for smile
You deliver a meaningful message in excellent nonet form.
Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the detailed review.
Comment from Pili Pubul
I enjoy this Nonet very much, it is funny and so true. Written with all the requirements of the style, good alliteration and imagery. I have two kittens
Max and Mimi brother and sister that look just like the picture you chose....
Adorable. Pili
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I enjoy this Nonet very much, it is funny and so true. Written with all the requirements of the style, good alliteration and imagery. I have two kittens
Max and Mimi brother and sister that look just like the picture you chose....
Adorable. Pili
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the great review. Good luck with the kittens. They are so much fun.
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You are so welcome. Yes they are fun... Pili
Comment from paulah60
A very well-written nonet with an important message: that irrespective of what's taking place around us, we always have a choice as to how we respond to it. No one can change our minds but us! That you've included rhyme in your poem is a bonus.
I expect you'll do well in the contest.
Cheers
Paula
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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A very well-written nonet with an important message: that irrespective of what's taking place around us, we always have a choice as to how we respond to it. No one can change our minds but us! That you've included rhyme in your poem is a bonus.
I expect you'll do well in the contest.
Cheers
Paula
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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thank you for the kind review.