The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Condors Flight"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
16 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi Carolyn,
I owe you an apology.
In my last review of your writing, I meant metres not members. It's the Ipads fault.
The condors rise looks like a wish. Make it a good wish.
The lands soul sound so good.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
Hi Carolyn,
I owe you an apology.
In my last review of your writing, I meant metres not members. It's the Ipads fault.
The condors rise looks like a wish. Make it a good wish.
The lands soul sound so good.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thanks Benny, never a need to apologize, although it is nice of you to do it, no telling what I write at times. LOL Glad you enjoyed Condors Flight. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hello Carolyn good to see you back.
I don't believe I've actually seen a condor in this part of the world. They belong to the western hemisphere and are a type of vulture I believe. We do have vultures here.
Cheers
Sylvia
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
Hello Carolyn good to see you back.
I don't believe I've actually seen a condor in this part of the world. They belong to the western hemisphere and are a type of vulture I believe. We do have vultures here.
Cheers
Sylvia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Yes there are several species of vultures. The condors, being the largest live in California USA and the Andes. We have several here in Missouri as well. Cheers back to you, Carolyn
Comment from JMUwrites
Oh yeah, a very enjoyable read this is Carolyn...excellent depiction of what the Condor looks like and does! I've always found them to be fascinating and under-appreciated birds...which I'm sure has to do with their incredibly beautiful looks! ;)
Thanks for sharing this one and take good care!
Jeffrey
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
Oh yeah, a very enjoyable read this is Carolyn...excellent depiction of what the Condor looks like and does! I've always found them to be fascinating and under-appreciated birds...which I'm sure has to do with their incredibly beautiful looks! ;)
Thanks for sharing this one and take good care!
Jeffrey
Comment Written 07-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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And they are probably un appreciated for their taste in food, but where would all that carrion go if they didn't clean it up? Glad you enjoyed it Jeffrey, :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
Would love to just drift in the wind and look down on the world like all the birds do it must be quite a sight for them floating high up in the air.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
Would love to just drift in the wind and look down on the world like all the birds do it must be quite a sight for them floating high up in the air.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Thanks for such a neat review. :-) Carolyn
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welcome
Comment from angelface2
I really enjoyed reading this, Carolyn. I've never actually seen a condor. They are a very big majestic bird. There is some awesome imagery there. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
I really enjoyed reading this, Carolyn. I've never actually seen a condor. They are a very big majestic bird. There is some awesome imagery there. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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They are a form of vulture, but all creatures have a beauty about them. Thanks for the great review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain about the beauty of the bird in flight, excellent imagery presented. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain about the beauty of the bird in flight, excellent imagery presented. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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I am glad you enjoyed the Condors Flight. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
Hello again Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem. The condor is a magnificent bird. The picture gives the reader a birds-eye-view. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
Hello again Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem. The condor is a magnificent bird. The picture gives the reader a birds-eye-view. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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And I like your review. I hope you are doing well. Thanks, Carolyn
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I am doing very well. I enjoyed the poems.
Comment from krys123
Super wow! From the beautiful words to the picture you have chosen all enriches the idea and the idealism of your poem.
Masterfully written, the imagery captures the beholder who reads the words which are so simple but graciously shows the elegance of a bird of beauty.
Thank you so much Carolyn for sharing this with everyone including myself. Truly you are a great one for writing the styles of poetry. You have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
Super wow! From the beautiful words to the picture you have chosen all enriches the idea and the idealism of your poem.
Masterfully written, the imagery captures the beholder who reads the words which are so simple but graciously shows the elegance of a bird of beauty.
Thank you so much Carolyn for sharing this with everyone including myself. Truly you are a great one for writing the styles of poetry. You have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Thanks Alex for this wonderful review. I am delighted you have enjoyed these quatrains. :-) Carolyn
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You are so welcome Carolyn in your poetry keeps on amazing me.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I thought your poem was great. The picture you chose to use with it is too. The bird looks big. You did a great job in writing this and it was a most enjoyable read.
Kat
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
Hi Carolyn,
I thought your poem was great. The picture you chose to use with it is too. The bird looks big. You did a great job in writing this and it was a most enjoyable read.
Kat
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Hi Kat, Condors are a form of vulture and are gigantic. I am glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful poem and the picture is stunning. Together, they conjure up images of an untamed landscape full of wonder and awe.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
This is a beautiful poem and the picture is stunning. Together, they conjure up images of an untamed landscape full of wonder and awe.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Tomes, thanks again for such an encouraging review. Glad you liked Condors Flight. :-) Carolyn
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I did indeed.