A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Raven's Fare"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
90 total reviews
Comment from daeneam
This is my first time to stumble on your poetry, Sir! I was intrigued by your profile and the unique art you used in this poem. Gothic, terrifying and creepy! I also appreciate your notes since it made the poem more intense and true-to-life!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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This is my first time to stumble on your poetry, Sir! I was intrigued by your profile and the unique art you used in this poem. Gothic, terrifying and creepy! I also appreciate your notes since it made the poem more intense and true-to-life!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Well, we all stumble from time to time, my friend, and I am so glad to have you stumble into my work. I am very glad you enjoyed this format. It's one I've created exclusively for FanStory, and I call it, a Pictapoem ®. It combines elements of art and music or sounds, and historical facts, to create a sort of sensory experience for the reader, to draw them into the story or poem.
They are all in my book, "A Poem is worth a thousand Pictures", which is in my portfolio.
I appreciate you taking a look, and I thank you for the wonderful review!
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Thank you for the enlightenment. Another interesting form of poetry is added on my list.
Comment from Author Unknown
Excellent and eerie too...I've been to Wyoming, a VERY long time ago and should have moved there to do my art. Oh well. This makes me want to go see this place. Nice work! :) A. /PS! CROWS! These birds are a horror in themselves. I love the wind sounds, and coyotes. Sounds like home...I do need to get my bb gun for these crows! LOL!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Excellent and eerie too...I've been to Wyoming, a VERY long time ago and should have moved there to do my art. Oh well. This makes me want to go see this place. Nice work! :) A. /PS! CROWS! These birds are a horror in themselves. I love the wind sounds, and coyotes. Sounds like home...I do need to get my bb gun for these crows! LOL!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Hah, well, make sure you're shooting downwind, AU, the BB's will travel farther, LOL...
Thanks for the witty review, my friend.
Comment from Sylvia Page
Dean this is an outstanding piece of work. Beautifully set and presented in an awe inspiring manner. The music is deadly.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Dean this is an outstanding piece of work. Beautifully set and presented in an awe inspiring manner. The music is deadly.
Sylvia
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks, Sylvia. Sounds like a great place to take a vacation, huh? I really appreciate the awesome review, my friend!
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I could handle your author's notes. I turned down the sound as it was such an eerie sound of the raven. I have no desire to visit ghost towns, I'm a bit of a chicken in that department. You're great at the gift God has given you. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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I could handle your author's notes. I turned down the sound as it was such an eerie sound of the raven. I have no desire to visit ghost towns, I'm a bit of a chicken in that department. You're great at the gift God has given you. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much, Evelyn. I'm happy to know that you made it through this one no worse for wear, LOL...
I appreciate the great review.
Blessings, my friend.
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi Dean,
This is another excellent poem, eerie and mysterious. Raven's Fare is the perfect holiday destination,only a one-way ticket needed. Thanks for including the note at the end of your poem. This is very interesting and I'm sure a lively place on Halloween.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Hi Dean,
This is another excellent poem, eerie and mysterious. Raven's Fare is the perfect holiday destination,only a one-way ticket needed. Thanks for including the note at the end of your poem. This is very interesting and I'm sure a lively place on Halloween.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you, Rosalyne. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
In spite of your glowing review of Raven's Fare, it will not make my bucket list. You've written a fitting tribute to this haunted place on the map. I always appreciate your author's notes. Not sure how you find out about these obscure places!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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In spite of your glowing review of Raven's Fare, it will not make my bucket list. You've written a fitting tribute to this haunted place on the map. I always appreciate your author's notes. Not sure how you find out about these obscure places!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Hah, I won't be visiting there any time soon either, Green Lake Girl.
I'm glad you liked the poem, though!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Wow. What a way to start my day. Almost spilled my coffee when the adventure started. After settling down I became immersed in your vivid writing and nature's stirring serenade. Well done indeed!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Wow. What a way to start my day. Almost spilled my coffee when the adventure started. After settling down I became immersed in your vivid writing and nature's stirring serenade. Well done indeed!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much, Jean, I truly appreciate that!
Comment from emjaihammond
Dean,
This is great and as always your presentation is as they say "OUT OF THIS WORLD" EEKS! Love the poem and the extras too. I wish I knew how to do this. Your work is always amazing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Dean,
This is great and as always your presentation is as they say "OUT OF THIS WORLD" EEKS! Love the poem and the extras too. I wish I knew how to do this. Your work is always amazing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks s much, emjaihammond. I really appreciate it. I'm having a lot better luck with my poetry than prose lately. Thanks again, my friend!
Comment from justatuna
Always the best. Always the show. I run out of things to say about you, Dean. I'm not a poet so I can only judge on how one's words captivate me. Yours always do. Sometimes I don't remember reading what you've written as I'm in the story. That's what your poems are like to me. Stories. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Always the best. Always the show. I run out of things to say about you, Dean. I'm not a poet so I can only judge on how one's words captivate me. Yours always do. Sometimes I don't remember reading what you've written as I'm in the story. That's what your poems are like to me. Stories. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much for those kind words, justatuna. I have fared much better with my poetry than my prose lately.
Thanks again, my friend!
Comment from livelylinda
Dean, what can I say? You continue to reach beyond the stars to write words which haunt us and add pictures and music for this total package. . .I sometimes find it difficult just getting the words right for a small poem. . .The is original, clever and exciting, as usual. livelylinda
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Dean, what can I say? You continue to reach beyond the stars to write words which haunt us and add pictures and music for this total package. . .I sometimes find it difficult just getting the words right for a small poem. . .The is original, clever and exciting, as usual. livelylinda
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Wow, such wonderful praise, Linda. I am truly not worthy!
I wish my fans were as passionate about my stories as they were my poetry. Thanks so much again. my friend!