A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "~Waiting with Open Graves~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from SimplyaStudent
Very well written Dean, and the authors notes added to the effect of the poem. Being the type of person who believes in God and archangels and the like, I do believe that there are deomons and so on that are probably more powerful in certain areas. Got directions to this place?? :) SS
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Very well written Dean, and the authors notes added to the effect of the poem. Being the type of person who believes in God and archangels and the like, I do believe that there are deomons and so on that are probably more powerful in certain areas. Got directions to this place?? :) SS
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Well, all I know is that it is somewhere in Ohio, my home state. I'll bet I could find you some on http://www.hauntedohio.com,, if you really want to go, LOL.
Thanks for that great review, SS...
Comment from Jade Lawson
This was another frightening and great poem from you. Again excellent presentation, the sound in my laptop is not working today though, but I am sure it must complement the eerie and scary feeling of this poem very well. I loved to read the author notes, it's amazing your research about horror stuff. Particularly the last stanza is my favourite, it leaves the sense of suspense and danger in the air, one must stay out of that cemetery. Execellent job.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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This was another frightening and great poem from you. Again excellent presentation, the sound in my laptop is not working today though, but I am sure it must complement the eerie and scary feeling of this poem very well. I loved to read the author notes, it's amazing your research about horror stuff. Particularly the last stanza is my favourite, it leaves the sense of suspense and danger in the air, one must stay out of that cemetery. Execellent job.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thanks very much, Angel. I am really glad that you enjoyed it...
Comment from S A Bullen
Dean, that is wonderful. Omg you are soooo clever. Perfectly rhymed and I spoke with the accent as I read along. Lol Suitably creepy and beautifully written. Absolutely deserving of your awards. Sheryn :-)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Dean, that is wonderful. Omg you are soooo clever. Perfectly rhymed and I spoke with the accent as I read along. Lol Suitably creepy and beautifully written. Absolutely deserving of your awards. Sheryn :-)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thanks very much, Sheryn. I'm so glad that you liked this one. I had my doubts about even posting it, given the subject matter, but the "good gal" does win (sort of, LOL) in the end...
I really appreciate the fabulous review!
Comment from poet.wayne
Great poem... you really brought the legend you wrote of, to life with it! The creepy music is the perfect background setting, and the author's notes add to the believability of the legend...Awesome!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Great poem... you really brought the legend you wrote of, to life with it! The creepy music is the perfect background setting, and the author's notes add to the believability of the legend...Awesome!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thanks, PW! I am very happy that you enjoyed it...
Comment from amada
Very well written story. The old caretaker got what he deserved. For sure an horror tale with a great twist. Fabulous presentation.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Very well written story. The old caretaker got what he deserved. For sure an horror tale with a great twist. Fabulous presentation.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much, amada! I'm very glad that you liked it!
Comment from tbacha58
Hi Dean, you kill me after reading your poems, and the appropriate music made me jump off my chair, I try to think its not true, but somehow, you write it so well that I agree with you. Love your scary poems. Hope I can sleep well tonight, and wake up by the unknown. Hehe You are thee top writer. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Hi Dean, you kill me after reading your poems, and the appropriate music made me jump off my chair, I try to think its not true, but somehow, you write it so well that I agree with you. Love your scary poems. Hope I can sleep well tonight, and wake up by the unknown. Hehe You are thee top writer. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Hah, nah, just an old horror hack, tryin' to entertain, Terry. Now, your talent, that's something special!
Thanks so much for the kind words and great review!
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When is the second one coming in, I got hooked to your Devil........smile.....young man.......nite.....T xx
Comment from write hand blue
I'm giving you six for this poem, because I'm not likely to see anything better on this site.
It's just as well that Myrtle woke up when she did, otherwise it would have been a different type of poem. LOL.
Not too brilliant for the caretaker though, serves him right.
A masterful production, better than coffee in the early hours to stave off somnolence. Good work...
:) mel.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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I'm giving you six for this poem, because I'm not likely to see anything better on this site.
It's just as well that Myrtle woke up when she did, otherwise it would have been a different type of poem. LOL.
Not too brilliant for the caretaker though, serves him right.
A masterful production, better than coffee in the early hours to stave off somnolence. Good work...
:) mel.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Hah, well, coffee does have it's good points too, Mel, LOL. I am very grateful for the fantastic review!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Holy crap. You are too darn good at this! Scared the bejesus out of me. LOL. Is this the cemetery you and your family will be visiting Halloween night? Uh, if I said don't go, would you even consider not going?
You get my last sixer, buddy.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Holy crap. You are too darn good at this! Scared the bejesus out of me. LOL. Is this the cemetery you and your family will be visiting Halloween night? Uh, if I said don't go, would you even consider not going?
You get my last sixer, buddy.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Hah, thanks, Dawn!
No, the one we're going to is called Witches Circle, in Indiana. But from what I've heard, it's just as creepy!
Comment from gramalot8
Dean, wow, such a creepy, crawly, horrifically intense poem. The sounds, and pictures do it justice as well. A great poem for this time of year. Thanks for sharing the extra history of the cementery with us as well.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Dean, wow, such a creepy, crawly, horrifically intense poem. The sounds, and pictures do it justice as well. A great poem for this time of year. Thanks for sharing the extra history of the cementery with us as well.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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And allow me to thank
Comment from baustian64
Wow, this is quite a story and poem. Have you ever been there. Have you gone at midnight. It sounds so scary and spooky. I know of a few places like that.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Wow, this is quite a story and poem. Have you ever been there. Have you gone at midnight. It sounds so scary and spooky. I know of a few places like that.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Nope, I have never been to this one, and I'm not so sure I want to, LOL...
Thanks for the great review, baustian64~