Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Queens of fall indeed. With fifty sahdes of green, no one is complainign about the lack of greenery, smiles.
The brillianc eof hte colors is a paradise for natural colors combination designs.
Nature has a way of telling us how to blend colors witht he natural surroundings.
Truly a beautiful lane of colors as penned by the story and the pic.
Excellent nonet and good luck to the contest.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013

I didn't win but thanks for the best wishes anyway LOL. Good to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed Queens of Fall. We are creating a stir with our Duet... Love, Carolyn

reply by 9999pool on 16-Nov-2013

Hi Carolyn,

Tom aka Tresichel said that we blended so well, he couldn't tell who wrote what in the Duet, smiles.
I always believed that poetry had no form or signature unless we wanted to place it there.
I shall be reading your reviewers comments in the Duet Poem and I do hope you are reading what they wrote in Part 2.
Your Duet Poem with Karen will raise a desert storm that can take the readers to a land of dreams and heartaches. Smiles.
Cheerio, bro Ritchie, hugs, :))

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
good alliteration in creating canopy
and in royalty's robe
lovely detail of setting
and effective imagery :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks Brooke, I appreciate the wonderful review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

A very pleasant picture painted in one's mind from the photo and your words. Great job with the nonet. Your words flowed well into the required lines/syllables.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

Thanks ragamuffin (I like your pen-name) I'm glad you enjoyed Queens of Fall. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Journey woman

Excellent

The photo rounds out the descriptive verse.

And these words speak volumes. Well Done Journey Woman

"Designer colors

Royalty's robe

Majestic

Queens of

Fall"

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

I appreciate your fine review of h is one and glad you liked it, Carolyn

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Boy oh boy that was as about as perfectly descriptive as the colors and beauty of the fall season as I've ever read. Just beautiful in every way possible!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

Thanks Steve, so glad you enjoyed this one. Fall is gorgeous this year in Missouri. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

It is autumn. The colours are wonderful
This such a beautiful writing.
I love it very much.

I hope you got my explanation why God knows everything.
I am wondering if you got it.like to think that it was not offending. If it is please forgive me.

Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Bennie, I am glad you enjoyed Queens of Fall. Yes I did get your thoughts on how God sees everything. I thought I replied, I appreciated your time and sensitivity to the subject, as well as the loving manner in which you sent your message. You did not offend me at all. Quite the contrary, although we may not share the exact viewpoint in all areas , we certainly agree that God has no form and is everywhere, be it London or America. I plan to release 'Papa's answer to Faith' shortly. Thank you for your wonderful support and encouragement. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Great metaphor-the autumnal trees could look like queens in jewel studded coverings of red, green, yellow, and purple. Best line:Absence of chlorophyll.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013

Glad you enjoyed this one. I have missed you! :-) Carolyn

reply by Spitfire on 20-Oct-2013

Thanks, Carol. I've been busy editing and proofreading my book for publishing. I'm working on two new pieces whenever I take a break.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

The winding road stretched before me ...8 could add it stretched

Tree-lined creating canopy ... 8

Entourage of brilliance.... 7

Absence of chlorophyll ...6

Designer colors .... 5

Royalty's robe ..... 4

Majestic ...3

Queens of ... 2

Fall ...1


This is beautiful Carolyn so descriptive but I make the syllable count 8 on opening line . The road stretched me all 1 syllable winding and before 2 syllables I am sure you can find an easy fix regards Jill and Erick

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013

Thank you so much for catching that error. I had counted it as two. It will now read, stretched out before me. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Love, Carolyn

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

The winding road stretched before me

Tree-lined creating canopy
Entourage of brilliance
Absence of chlorophyll
Designer colors
Royalty's robe
Majestic
Queens of
Fall

What a beautiful tribute to fall girl. Such a great Nonet and your words are wonderful.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you Pam, for your wonderful review of Queens of Fall. I am happy you liked the words as well as the form. That means a lot to me. :-) Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 20-Oct-2013

Sigh girl. Yeah I did.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

My gratitude to you Carolyn for sharing this Nonnet style poem with fans, myself and other readers/writers. I must compliment you very much for your choice of pictures which complements your poem and vice a versa. Your choice of directing and coloring your imagery of the falls most breathtaking visions which also describes the type of season that you have well worded in your verse is magnificent. You have a Good one and God bless.
AK

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thanks AK, I am especially glad that you enjoyed this one. I appreciate the review and the excellent rating. :-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 20-Oct-2013

You are so welcome Carolyn I try my best to be fair and reviews