Raindancing
a cinquain19 total reviews
Comment from Carol Adele
I like this cinquain and I imaging that the first part, "Dancing outside in rain helps dissolve stress and pain" must be true. I am thinking that I need to do that again.
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I like this cinquain and I imaging that the first part, "Dancing outside in rain helps dissolve stress and pain" must be true. I am thinking that I need to do that again.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from mickbey
Nice, the title, the illustration, and the poem all fit together well, the words of the poem lay out a light-hearted mood that makes it an enjoyable read, good luck.
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Nice, the title, the illustration, and the poem all fit together well, the words of the poem lay out a light-hearted mood that makes it an enjoyable read, good luck.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from mfowler
This is a lovely chinquapin. It draws a nice image of movement and those simple rhymes make it flow off the page. The message is also very good.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely chinquapin. It draws a nice image of movement and those simple rhymes make it flow off the page. The message is also very good.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this cinquain, Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ah, a lovely cinquain. What's more, it even rhymes!
Hey, you just can't beat that for entertainment, now, can you?
I myself love to dance in the rain, but only during the spring and summer months, of course. Fall and winter, 'eh...not so much.
Great job, and I think you have a winner here!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Ah, a lovely cinquain. What's more, it even rhymes!
Hey, you just can't beat that for entertainment, now, can you?
I myself love to dance in the rain, but only during the spring and summer months, of course. Fall and winter, 'eh...not so much.
Great job, and I think you have a winner here!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this cinquain. Definitely an entertaining activity for both dancers and observers. Warm summer rain would be ideal, and perhaps done on a white sandy beach with lots of tropical drinks available - those with spears of fruit and tiny umbrellas. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from Sueellen11
Excellent mu friend,,you nailed it,,lovely Cinquain ,, true to form and count,,, worded beautifully,,, yes I so related to this one,,,love the rain,,blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Excellent mu friend,,you nailed it,,lovely Cinquain ,, true to form and count,,, worded beautifully,,, yes I so related to this one,,,love the rain,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thanks, sueellen - So glad you enjoyed this cinquain, and could relate to it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
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I loved it got my vote,,blessings sue
Comment from Charlene0513
Whatever the reason, whatever your pleasure as long as you are enjoying yourself, who cares what others think of your crazy antics.
Charlene
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Whatever the reason, whatever your pleasure as long as you are enjoying yourself, who cares what others think of your crazy antics.
Charlene
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
Comment from MarjorieAnne
Lovely expression of childlike abandon and release of gloom. Nice parallel between "in rain" and "in refrain". Skillful use of alliteration, though "drip and wash" seem a bit incongruent with dancing. Also "helps" weakens "dissolve" a little.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Lovely expression of childlike abandon and release of gloom. Nice parallel between "in rain" and "in refrain". Skillful use of alliteration, though "drip and wash" seem a bit incongruent with dancing. Also "helps" weakens "dissolve" a little.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your comments ... ;-)
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You're welcome
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You're welcome
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. I like the joyful tone. The word choice is great. I liked the rhyme. The picture is appropriate.
Barbara
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. I like the joyful tone. The word choice is great. I liked the rhyme. The picture is appropriate.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Barbara - So glad you enjoyed this poem, its tone, word choices, rhyme and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from Gungalo
Dancing
outside in rain
helps dissolve stress and pain
Doldrums drip and wash away ... in
refrain
Damn straight it's good for ya. The only thing any better is when you can take off all your clothes and do it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Dancing
outside in rain
helps dissolve stress and pain
Doldrums drip and wash away ... in
refrain
Damn straight it's good for ya. The only thing any better is when you can take off all your clothes and do it.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Yeah...right on, Dear Gungalo. Hey, if you take a picture of yourself dancing outside in the rain without any clothes and send it to me, I'll switch pictures ... ;o)
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I doubt that very much. LOL
Comment from Tessa Kay
You fulfilled the brief perfectly. It's been pouring here in Ireland all day today, but with the cold wind I didn't feel like dancing in the rain, although your picture makes it look quite appealing.
All the best for the competition.
:) Tessa
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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You fulfilled the brief perfectly. It's been pouring here in Ireland all day today, but with the cold wind I didn't feel like dancing in the rain, although your picture makes it look quite appealing.
All the best for the competition.
:) Tessa
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Tessa. Dancing in cold rain today sounds miserable - better to stay warm inside and perhaps have a pint of Guinness. Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)