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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Dreams Of Satin"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from Sankey
Very nice mate. I love Satin Some times I get mixed up between satin and Silk. maybe they have the same colours but the satin is not as smooth as silk. Good way of describing personalities and feelings huh! Good work. again.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Very nice mate. I love Satin Some times I get mixed up between satin and Silk. maybe they have the same colours but the satin is not as smooth as silk. Good way of describing personalities and feelings huh! Good work. again.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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glad you liked this. it actually is a song. mike
Comment from pattipac
Like how your compare your love for a particular women using satin. Dreams of satin make your feel her warmth, like the warmth you feel when you are gently rocked by the constant pulse of water.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Like how your compare your love for a particular women using satin. Dreams of satin make your feel her warmth, like the warmth you feel when you are gently rocked by the constant pulse of water.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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that is 100% exactly on the money what I was saying. yea! I love it when someone gets what I am saying. thank you. mikey
Comment from krys123
Again let me tell you thank you so much for sharing this poem with myself, fans and other readers/writers. I'll have to tell you that your color arrangement with your words and the background makes it very easy hard to read your poem. Your poem is okay because it lacks a derogatory topic or concept in context. You've a good one in God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Again let me tell you thank you so much for sharing this poem with myself, fans and other readers/writers. I'll have to tell you that your color arrangement with your words and the background makes it very easy hard to read your poem. Your poem is okay because it lacks a derogatory topic or concept in context. You've a good one in God bless.
AK
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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oh! thank you for noticing. I am getting more familiar with the editing. we are lucky to have so much beautiful artwork available at our fingertips. blessings, mike
Comment from Cookie333
Okay, Mr. Mike...Now I have a tune (nights in white satin...) stuck in my head. I am still working on writing one of these gems. Did you have a 'refrain' in mind for yours? I am only asking because I have no idea what I am doing...writing a song I mean.
thanks for sharing this one,
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Okay, Mr. Mike...Now I have a tune (nights in white satin...) stuck in my head. I am still working on writing one of these gems. Did you have a 'refrain' in mind for yours? I am only asking because I have no idea what I am doing...writing a song I mean.
thanks for sharing this one,
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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this is a song. dre eeeams of saaa aa tin yoooouuuu.
repeated
sitting on a raft on a lake
rocked by ,,,,,
drawing its......
its depth from.......soooooouuuuuullllll
dreeeee eeeeems ............
your eyes
your smile
your voice
on and on hahaha! has a cool chord that I only use on this song. an E chord with a c# and F# on the top two strings. ask a guitar player to play it for you. hey dude!!!! what are you talking about??? you don't need to know anything. The Beatles used to just tell George Martin (their producer) what they wanted things to sound like and he would keep experimenting until they said "yea, that's it!" glad you liked this. I do too. mikey
Comment from country ranch writer
dreams of satin: making you think of things you know you should do but want to do very much and he is egging you on. Making you think it is ok like relaxing with a woman out on the lake
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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dreams of satin: making you think of things you know you should do but want to do very much and he is egging you on. Making you think it is ok like relaxing with a woman out on the lake
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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yes, indeed. right on the money as always! thank you. mike
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welcome
Comment from songbyrd
doesn't cover
discovering you
Really good lines there Mr. Mike.. which I've come to expect. Just excellent words choices describing some of those dreams we just never could forget totally..
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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doesn't cover
discovering you
Really good lines there Mr. Mike.. which I've come to expect. Just excellent words choices describing some of those dreams we just never could forget totally..
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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thank you kindly. this is one of my songs. actually one of the ones I actually like. regards, mikey
Comment from CR Delport
You create a very nice picture of a serene dream that is smooth and soft as silk. Another great poem, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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You create a very nice picture of a serene dream that is smooth and soft as silk. Another great poem, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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one of my songs. a very nice memory for me. very happy for the kind words. thank you very much, mike
Comment from Brocha1
beautiful.
waters should be water's I think.
a silky stunning read. I love the message here. beyond the sensuousness it is the real inner warmth that speaks the loudest and embraces truly.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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beautiful.
waters should be water's I think.
a silky stunning read. I love the message here. beyond the sensuousness it is the real inner warmth that speaks the loudest and embraces truly.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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oh yeah you are right water's. will fix that. thank you. this one is true. just her presence inspired this. happy that you liked it. one of my songs. mikey