A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "~Handwriting on the Wall~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
44 total reviews
Comment from esslow
I relate to your emotions. I admire your willingness to discuss the darkness of what the human condition can reach. You tell me what you feel. Maybe feel and then tell........describe it as you feel it rather than feel it and then tell what you feel. Your amazing in your thoughts and what goes on in your mind. I am hooked to your stories.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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I relate to your emotions. I admire your willingness to discuss the darkness of what the human condition can reach. You tell me what you feel. Maybe feel and then tell........describe it as you feel it rather than feel it and then tell what you feel. Your amazing in your thoughts and what goes on in your mind. I am hooked to your stories.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thanks so much, esslow, I truly appreciate that!
Comment from cinderbella
This is a very powerful and thought-provoking poem which asks questions to which there are no clear-cut answers.
The poem is chilling, and the message comparatively so. It is written well, and certainly holds the reader's attention. I quite liked it. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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This is a very powerful and thought-provoking poem which asks questions to which there are no clear-cut answers.
The poem is chilling, and the message comparatively so. It is written well, and certainly holds the reader's attention. I quite liked it. :) Sandra
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Sandra. I am glad that you enjoyed reading it!
Comment from emjaihammond
This is crazy scary and the sound effects make it even more so. I was just a little lost in the way this whole thing happened. Maybe you left out details so it would be more effective. It is spooky just as it is.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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This is crazy scary and the sound effects make it even more so. I was just a little lost in the way this whole thing happened. Maybe you left out details so it would be more effective. It is spooky just as it is.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, emjaihammond. It's simply about the direction our health care industry is taking, it's all there in my author's notes, my friend...
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Well now, that truly is very spooky! It all makes sense now. Sorry I missed the author's notes. My mistake.
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I found this spine-chilling and quite fearful. You certainly created an atmosphere of horror in this one. Someone is playing God here. Well done Dean, on another perfect contribution.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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I found this spine-chilling and quite fearful. You certainly created an atmosphere of horror in this one. Someone is playing God here. Well done Dean, on another perfect contribution.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for all of your support, Liz. I really appreciate it!
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Wonderful stuff D-Nuts, I am glad to see some horror...you are the only one who really creeps me out. What ever happened to Gary Cecil?
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Wonderful stuff D-Nuts, I am glad to see some horror...you are the only one who really creeps me out. What ever happened to Gary Cecil?
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks, 'Sak. If I creep you out, I consider that a HUGE accomplishment, LOL...
As far as Gary goes, he had been struggling with some health issues last I heard. He pops in from time to time, but not nearly as often as he used to.
Thanks again, buddy! I really appreciate it.
Comment from GratefullyRecovering
Bravo!!!
You did an amazing job, yet again, I'm not surprised! :)
The picture is creepy but good :) Your poem is excellent.
If it didn't creep me out so much, I'd read more of your work :P
I love ya! Great work!!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Bravo!!!
You did an amazing job, yet again, I'm not surprised! :)
The picture is creepy but good :) Your poem is excellent.
If it didn't creep me out so much, I'd read more of your work :P
I love ya! Great work!!!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Grate! I'm really happy that you liked this!
Comment from write hand blue
Yet another of your creations, written to the same high standard.
I see in your notes you highlight the dilemma facing the medical profession. When to turn off the machine. Strict rules will have to be created (if they already haven't).
A most enjoyable read.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Yet another of your creations, written to the same high standard.
I see in your notes you highlight the dilemma facing the medical profession. When to turn off the machine. Strict rules will have to be created (if they already haven't).
A most enjoyable read.
:) mel.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your outstanding review, Mel!
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My pleasure...
Comment from Ridley Williams
You make some great points in this piece. The writing is on the wall in the case of our medical sciences, and the distribution of health care in our country. I know I can't afford to live to be too old, he he. Damn fine write, Dean. Nice work, Bill
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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You make some great points in this piece. The writing is on the wall in the case of our medical sciences, and the distribution of health care in our country. I know I can't afford to live to be too old, he he. Damn fine write, Dean. Nice work, Bill
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Bill, and neither can I! I appreciate your read & review, my friend!
Comment from 9999pool
Yes, bias in advocating treatment to certain patients in hospitals by the administration can be erroneous and could be unfair. Written on the walls patients can face and see their death sentence if not administered on time or being treated unfairly.
As the court decides and gives out punishment, hospital administrations are doing the same but this time it is a life and death question.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :)).
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Yes, bias in advocating treatment to certain patients in hospitals by the administration can be erroneous and could be unfair. Written on the walls patients can face and see their death sentence if not administered on time or being treated unfairly.
As the court decides and gives out punishment, hospital administrations are doing the same but this time it is a life and death question.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :)).
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your keen insights and wonderful review on this one, Ritchie!
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Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from babylonia
I guarantee that whichever the decision is made ... to help or not to help ... the poor will die and the rich will live. Reminds me of the book "Your Heart Belongs to Me" by Dean Koontz. It was about how rich people can get everything and use the poor to get it.
Nicely done.
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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I guarantee that whichever the decision is made ... to help or not to help ... the poor will die and the rich will live. Reminds me of the book "Your Heart Belongs to Me" by Dean Koontz. It was about how rich people can get everything and use the poor to get it.
Nicely done.
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Yes, you are absolutely right about that, Barbara. Also, that's a great book by Koontz, the very man my pen name is fashioned after. I couldn't seem to make Dean King work, LOL...
I appreciate your thoughts and kind review...