Violin & Satin
About a very brief love affair that burned hot and then out.5 total reviews
Comment from Curly Girly
Welcome to FS!
This is a lovely but sad poem. I think you wrote it well and it was interesting to read. How unfortunate and fickle the love-life can be.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Welcome to FS!
This is a lovely but sad poem. I think you wrote it well and it was interesting to read. How unfortunate and fickle the love-life can be.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your time and kind words.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, this must be a contest where everybody is made or unhappy with the love of their life. Well-written. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Well, this must be a contest where everybody is made or unhappy with the love of their life. Well-written. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and your kind words.
Comment from Treischel
A very good response to that writing prompt, this poem speaks clearly of lost love. Silk and satin make prefect metaphors for the thoughts you portrayed here.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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A very good response to that writing prompt, this poem speaks clearly of lost love. Silk and satin make prefect metaphors for the thoughts you portrayed here.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your time, kind words, and encouragement.
Comment from Supe
This is nicely done. I love the rhythm and flow from start to finish. You could make a ballad out of this I think. Good job. Good luck in the contest. Very creative!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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This is nicely done. I love the rhythm and flow from start to finish. You could make a ballad out of this I think. Good job. Good luck in the contest. Very creative!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your vote of confidence!
Comment from songbyrd
Broken relationships..being played is not a good feeling..I liked the line about the Scorpio spirit.. we do have that within us..This is well written with good word choices and flow.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Broken relationships..being played is not a good feeling..I liked the line about the Scorpio spirit.. we do have that within us..This is well written with good word choices and flow.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you, scorpio. No sting here.