A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "~Such a Fantasy~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
46 total reviews
Comment from GE Parson
Hi Dean,
Although my little brain didn't grasp your poem, what or who it was abou, I rated it a six because of the fancy words all rhyming with each other. I'm no really into this kind pf poetry, and perhaps that's why it is over my head.
Have a blessed weekend...........Your friend, Jerry
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
Hi Dean,
Although my little brain didn't grasp your poem, what or who it was abou, I rated it a six because of the fancy words all rhyming with each other. I'm no really into this kind pf poetry, and perhaps that's why it is over my head.
Have a blessed weekend...........Your friend, Jerry
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Jerry. If you watch the movie "Braveheart", starring Mel Gibson, then you'll get the basic idea...
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Kick ass poem, D-Nuts. I have never watched game of thrones, so I don't understand it fully. The flow was great and the writing as well. It made me want to give myself paper cuts on my eyeballs with a manila envelope. I want to give you six six sixers, but it wont let me as usual.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
Kick ass poem, D-Nuts. I have never watched game of thrones, so I don't understand it fully. The flow was great and the writing as well. It made me want to give myself paper cuts on my eyeballs with a manila envelope. I want to give you six six sixers, but it wont let me as usual.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks, 'Sak, I appreciate it brother!
Comment from Jade Lawson
Great tribute to Alex George's work. This was a very creative poem to show how brilliant his mind is. Great story, great characters, full of fantasy and the description of the surroundings, actions, magic and events it is outstanding. When I read his work I often recall the Lord of the rings, I think it is the right title. It was an amazing saga. Great poem and tribute, with a lovely presentation and sound.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
Great tribute to Alex George's work. This was a very creative poem to show how brilliant his mind is. Great story, great characters, full of fantasy and the description of the surroundings, actions, magic and events it is outstanding. When I read his work I often recall the Lord of the rings, I think it is the right title. It was an amazing saga. Great poem and tribute, with a lovely presentation and sound.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Angel. I am glad you know Alex's work, so you already understand what a talented writer he truly is...
Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Another spellbinding work and how clever that you are giving us the story of one of our own - Alex George. The presentation is as stunning as usual. Amazing work Dean.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
Another spellbinding work and how clever that you are giving us the story of one of our own - Alex George. The presentation is as stunning as usual. Amazing work Dean.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Stephanie. I certainly appreciate that!
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You are so welcome. Dean may I suggest you take a look at the title. I part of it gets lost. Is it possible to change the color?
Comment from Writingfundimension
Dean, I have to agree with your analysis of Alex's writing. This poem is a great way for one talented writer to introduce another talented writer. You're quite a generous guy! Great job... Bev
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
Dean, I have to agree with your analysis of Alex's writing. This poem is a great way for one talented writer to introduce another talented writer. You're quite a generous guy! Great job... Bev
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Bev, I appreciate that.
Comment from Dustybones
WOW. Let me get back to the poem, Game of Thrones - Single, Srod was excellent. I do like progressive rock. I will ave to download this in iTunes. One of my favorite guitarist is Steve Morse. Thanks for the feature presentation. Boyd
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
WOW. Let me get back to the poem, Game of Thrones - Single, Srod was excellent. I do like progressive rock. I will ave to download this in iTunes. One of my favorite guitarist is Steve Morse. Thanks for the feature presentation. Boyd
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks for checking it out for me...
Comment from madhatter1977
Brilliant poem, Dean, I really enjoyed it and, once again, the art work and music really adds to the poem. Great taste in music my friend!! Have you written novels as well by the way? I'll have a look at your portfolio and look up Alex George too. Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
Brilliant poem, Dean, I really enjoyed it and, once again, the art work and music really adds to the poem. Great taste in music my friend!! Have you written novels as well by the way? I'll have a look at your portfolio and look up Alex George too. Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, 'Hatter. I have written a couple of novels, both of them are posted here on FS. One's entitled, "Gag Order", about a group of teenaged boys who play a prank at a local drive-in movie theater, and things go from real bad, to worse. The other is currently ongoing, "Ouija's Kube", co-authored with JM daSilva. It is a novella, and will be approximately 20-22 chapters.
Thanks again for the great review!
Comment from lindalcreel
What a wonderful tribute to Alex. Like you, I can't wait to see this in print, backed by a huge publisher. No one writes historical fantasy quite like him, at least in this day and age. The music from "Game of Thrones" was perfect. After all his story is a game of thrones, isn't it? Beautiful! I read this more than once. Thanks so much for sharing. I know Alex will love it as much as I did.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
What a wonderful tribute to Alex. Like you, I can't wait to see this in print, backed by a huge publisher. No one writes historical fantasy quite like him, at least in this day and age. The music from "Game of Thrones" was perfect. After all his story is a game of thrones, isn't it? Beautiful! I read this more than once. Thanks so much for sharing. I know Alex will love it as much as I did.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Linda, and I am pleased to say that Alex did like it. Thanks for your great review!
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You're so welcome.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is well done, not real scary but in the setting of ancient time of good against evil. I don't read much fiction or fantasy. I guess I've had to live in the real world to survive and never let my mind take me out of reality figuring I MIGHT NOT FIND MY WAY BACK. VERY WELL WRITTEN. GOD LOVES YOU AND WE DO TOO.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
This is well done, not real scary but in the setting of ancient time of good against evil. I don't read much fiction or fantasy. I guess I've had to live in the real world to survive and never let my mind take me out of reality figuring I MIGHT NOT FIND MY WAY BACK. VERY WELL WRITTEN. GOD LOVES YOU AND WE DO TOO.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, and you're right. Sometimes, when you find yourself in the realms of a wonderful fantasy world, it is hard to come back to reality. But, return, we must...
Thanks again
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In my situation I COULDN'T AFFORD TO LET MYSELF GO THERE FOR i KNEW I PROBABLY WOULDN'T RETURN AND I HAD THREE CHILDREN TO TAKE CARE OF. IT WAS A SAFETY ISSUE FOR ME.I DIDN'T WANT TO END UP A SPLIT PERSONALITY, IT CAN HAPPEN WHEN YOU'RE TRAPPED FOR 32 YEARS IN A LIVING NIGHTMARE. GOD LOVES YOU AND SO DO I. TAG TEAMING
Comment from justatuna
You never cease to amaze me with your talent. I fully expect to see much of your writing published. I can't say I would change a thing. It was perfect and as good as anything I've ever read. Get the point? You really are an entertainer.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
You never cease to amaze me with your talent. I fully expect to see much of your writing published. I can't say I would change a thing. It was perfect and as good as anything I've ever read. Get the point? You really are an entertainer.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Wow, that is quite a wonderful compliment, justatuna, and I certainly thank you for that! I'm happy that you feel that way...:D