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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Soldiers In A Row"Song lyrics with music attached
8 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
the war has corrupted so many minds and the dont want to forget that the war is over so they continue on with one the started
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
the war has corrupted so many minds and the dont want to forget that the war is over so they continue on with one the started
Comment Written 24-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Yep, they never seem to learn. You have that right. mikey
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HUGS
Comment from madhatter1977
Great anti-war poem, Michael. Well written and with a great message that conflict is destructive and we should resolve differences peacefully. Best wishes mate, Pete :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
Great anti-war poem, Michael. Well written and with a great message that conflict is destructive and we should resolve differences peacefully. Best wishes mate, Pete :)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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glad you liked this. a topic where I must take a side and set forth my opinion. thank you as always, mike
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It was really good. Take care, Pete
Comment from Cookie333
I could actually hear a tune in my head as I was reading this one my friend- that does not happen often but my breath always catches when music accompanies a piece- very well done
Thank you
K
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
I could actually hear a tune in my head as I was reading this one my friend- that does not happen often but my breath always catches when music accompanies a piece- very well done
Thank you
K
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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all my music is on cassette tapes. ha! must catch up to the 21st century at some point. great review. thank you so much. mike
Comment from Louise Michelle
You really captured the essence of why men go to war. It takes a sincere belief that one is doing the right thing to go off and kill other humans. Well done, Lou
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
You really captured the essence of why men go to war. It takes a sincere belief that one is doing the right thing to go off and kill other humans. Well done, Lou
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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thank you very much. I try to just comment and observe as best I can without too much of my opinion. not easy and I rarely am completely unbiased. mike
Comment from krys123
A very interesting poem and when I read it I enjoyed it very much. How you masterfully combined the inner sanctum's of the many wars and the soldiers who lost their lives in the many wars that they fought. And also mentioning the victims of those wars. You covered the bases of why wars so non-becoming too antiwar activists. Thank you for sharing such a very interesting and audible poem. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
A very interesting poem and when I read it I enjoyed it very much. How you masterfully combined the inner sanctum's of the many wars and the soldiers who lost their lives in the many wars that they fought. And also mentioning the victims of those wars. You covered the bases of why wars so non-becoming too antiwar activists. Thank you for sharing such a very interesting and audible poem. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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always a little reluctant to put something out with my personal views fearful that the writing will take a back seat to that. thank you for this insightful review. most encouraging and appreciated. my courage level raises! mike
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
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You are welcome Mike I thought it was a very good poem and reminded me of Crosby stills and Nash song 'Ohio'. You have a good one.
Comment from Brocha1
I love your style. You are a thinker and your poetry has so many layers to it.
This is magnificently portrayed- a pile of dead superiority.
You get right into the crux of the senselessness and the hatred that propels war.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
I love your style. You are a thinker and your poetry has so many layers to it.
This is magnificently portrayed- a pile of dead superiority.
You get right into the crux of the senselessness and the hatred that propels war.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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very kind. thank you so much. mike
Comment from songbyrd
War is a horrible thing, but have always been and will always be. However some we didn't need to be in. I liked your style and the flow was good..I understood the pain and what war does to a man or woman..
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
War is a horrible thing, but have always been and will always be. However some we didn't need to be in. I liked your style and the flow was good..I understood the pain and what war does to a man or woman..
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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thank you for the great review. I agree war is without sense. so sad. mike
Comment from mauial
I like the free flow expression of this piece and how it really shows the stupidity of man who has a limited life span yet is determined to make it shorter through war. What a waste and the sad thing about it at the core of it is religious beliefs, that I believe in no way reflect who God is, but who the devil is.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
I like the free flow expression of this piece and how it really shows the stupidity of man who has a limited life span yet is determined to make it shorter through war. What a waste and the sad thing about it at the core of it is religious beliefs, that I believe in no way reflect who God is, but who the devil is.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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thank you for your fine review and your insight which I agree with whole heartedly. mike