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Behind The Door

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Comment from bard owl
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Your poem certainly reveals the true nature of success. It usually takes almost super human power to attain the reward of success. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
    Thank you for your kind review. I don't write very many poems but once in a while I kick one out there just to see what happens. Mr. Green
Comment from Supe
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Nicely done. You do not need a picture to accompany this piece. Success is what lies - behind the door. Sounds good to me. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
    Thank you for your kind review, I seldon write poems but once in a while I give it a try. Mr. Green
Comment from Kidlike101
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Nice entry and good flow of words.

might want to consider turning off the all caps next time.

I like the very last stanza

FOR YOU SEE...

SUCCESS IS WHAT LIES -

BEHIND THE DOOR

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
    Thank you for our kind review, I don't write many poems but on occasion I will give it a try. Mr. Green