Sleep deprivation
Torturing the muse.6 total reviews
Comment from barleygirl
Very fun & playful, even tho the message is very serious! I suffer from insomnia & you've captured the feeling here perfectly, complete with mental images to SHOW what's going on inside the crazed brain! Even the picture is looking a little jagged & OCD'ed with the crazy lettering! Great job! Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Very fun & playful, even tho the message is very serious! I suffer from insomnia & you've captured the feeling here perfectly, complete with mental images to SHOW what's going on inside the crazed brain! Even the picture is looking a little jagged & OCD'ed with the crazy lettering! Great job! Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from june prescott
Very fun nonet in perfect form. My favorite is your very first line "Mental gymnastics so late at night." Thanks for sharing and giving me a chuckle. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Very fun nonet in perfect form. My favorite is your very first line "Mental gymnastics so late at night." Thanks for sharing and giving me a chuckle. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. Glad it brought a smile.
Comment from wierdgrace
I must say this contest is going to be hard, every time I read one, I say, awesome, then I read another, and it too says it all, this one especially, good luck in the contest, well written. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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I must say this contest is going to be hard, every time I read one, I say, awesome, then I read another, and it too says it all, this one especially, good luck in the contest, well written. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the kind review. I agree. tough decisions.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Battle between muse and author -- not good. Looks like the two of you got it together and birthed a fine nonet. Here's wishing you both well in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Battle between muse and author -- not good. Looks like the two of you got it together and birthed a fine nonet. Here's wishing you both well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from DanielEkine
the shape is definitely beautiful. I also love the rhyming still.
You did a great job.
SPAG is definitely in the right spot.
Overall it is not a bad work of any sort.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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the shape is definitely beautiful. I also love the rhyming still.
You did a great job.
SPAG is definitely in the right spot.
Overall it is not a bad work of any sort.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from playinaround
Although this is about an over tired person, this poem has so much energy. The cascade to the end and its meaning was cleverly done. I really enjoyed reading your nonet!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Although this is about an over tired person, this poem has so much energy. The cascade to the end and its meaning was cleverly done. I really enjoyed reading your nonet!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Energy is waning. Going to bed. Thanks for reviewing.