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Desperate Pentameter Pleas...33 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Don't worry, I'm not jumping ship--I enjoy your work too much! I don't often initiate fanning, because I can barely keep up with the reviews and do feel obligated if someone reviews my work to try to review theirs, even though I might have to pick and choose to find one I want to read and review. I liked your playful title and artwork selection, along with your signature sarcasm! It always amazes me that you can do these diatribes in meter and rhyme. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Don't worry, I'm not jumping ship--I enjoy your work too much! I don't often initiate fanning, because I can barely keep up with the reviews and do feel obligated if someone reviews my work to try to review theirs, even though I might have to pick and choose to find one I want to read and review. I liked your playful title and artwork selection, along with your signature sarcasm! It always amazes me that you can do these diatribes in meter and rhyme. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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LOL thanks Joan. This was just to let off some steam as I think its a hide to expect others to automatically fan you if you follow them. Glad I can still amaze you with my diatribe...ooh that is such a good word mate...might have to borrow that sometime.
I've thrashed "vernacular". LMAO
Thanks and take care
Phillippa xo
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"Diatribe" is yours to do with what you will--I'm sure I'll be further amazed! More hugs- Joan
Comment from Dougspoetry
Well let me just start by saying that I am honored that You are my fan. I totally agree that Fanstory seems to be a tool to feed some peoples egos. Thank God that we are both so HUMBLE! :) Anyway I love following Your posts, even though I don't always get a chance to review them. Nice writing on what is probably a sore subject for some, always a pleasure to read your work. Hope all is well!
God Bless
Doug
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Well let me just start by saying that I am honored that You are my fan. I totally agree that Fanstory seems to be a tool to feed some peoples egos. Thank God that we are both so HUMBLE! :) Anyway I love following Your posts, even though I don't always get a chance to review them. Nice writing on what is probably a sore subject for some, always a pleasure to read your work. Hope all is well!
God Bless
Doug
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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LOL Thanks Douglas...I know the time thing is against us sometimes and of course thats why we should ALL be able to choose who we follow and when. I'm only in and out a bit here at the moment as I have SO much on at present...busy, busy, busy!
Cheers and thanks for your fanship...I ALSO very much enjoy following you and MissMerri...you are two of my best religious writers and you meter is purrrrrrrrrfect.
Hugs P
xoxo
Comment from charlyann
Hahahahah give hell Norma Ray...cracked me up...you write and think like a super star babe...I just got back from a little 4 day holiday...been rushing like mad...I may feel a poem coming one...again, good stuff Miest :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Hahahahah give hell Norma Ray...cracked me up...you write and think like a super star babe...I just got back from a little 4 day holiday...been rushing like mad...I may feel a poem coming one...again, good stuff Miest :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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LOL YOU crack ME up sister!...hope you had a nice four days off! I f**king wish! Kids on school holidays here and I'm nuts already.
Thanks for the sixer my charly brown...really enjoyed your pm too, THANKYOU. Catch up soon...I see you have a post...YAY
Cheers PMeister
XXX
Comment from Hitcher
Who has the TIME to be fans with every Tom, Dick and Harry, quality is the name of the game for me, produce quality writing and Little old Hitch might well become a fan, if you need to ask me... You've already lost. It would be like someone that you are not attracted to saying they think you are sexy so lets go f*ck, it ain't goanna happen now is it :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Who has the TIME to be fans with every Tom, Dick and Harry, quality is the name of the game for me, produce quality writing and Little old Hitch might well become a fan, if you need to ask me... You've already lost. It would be like someone that you are not attracted to saying they think you are sexy so lets go f*ck, it ain't goanna happen now is it :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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In a word, NO. Haha. It has to be a mutual admiration of course. I guess unless you are really hard up for some action! LMAO
Thanks so much for your review my friend.
Cheers P
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Closet, now you are on a ship - what happened to Everest, or did we survive that and feel like a swim?
Ok this is one that has me wee brain moving in different directions - that can be a dangerous thing.
For me it boils down to my own integrity as a writer, reviewer and overall in my life. Partly cause all the other crap tires me out and means diddly squat.
You go girl, this is refreshing change. Not sure what is all going on the front page or throughout the site - sure feels like a Tsunami though, not at all pleasant.
Thanks for sharing - pass the chocolate - you can't hide it from me I smell it!!
Maureen
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Closet, now you are on a ship - what happened to Everest, or did we survive that and feel like a swim?
Ok this is one that has me wee brain moving in different directions - that can be a dangerous thing.
For me it boils down to my own integrity as a writer, reviewer and overall in my life. Partly cause all the other crap tires me out and means diddly squat.
You go girl, this is refreshing change. Not sure what is all going on the front page or throughout the site - sure feels like a Tsunami though, not at all pleasant.
Thanks for sharing - pass the chocolate - you can't hide it from me I smell it!!
Maureen
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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LOL No ship...just pissed off when people ASK for my reviewing excellence. Someone actually acknowledged it was like being bought or sold but still asked...I mean FFS.
Anyhow, noone buys the Closet...I give off myself freely if I like what I see...the rest I either don't like, or don't get time to get near.
Cheers and gimme back that f**king chocolate...I thought I had it hidden well behind the 2'high mm dispenser next to the chocolate bikkie tin and container of chocolate and marshmallow slice above the pot of melted chocolate on the stove near the sink with all the chocolate brownies I just got out of the oven.
Haha
Did ya like THAT little fix then eh? LMAO *snicker*
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ChocolateCoatedPee
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Crap it's like a war zone in this place, yikes. I think I'm walking the plank - cause I found your chocolate, and my firefighters:D
You are so mean...share the chocolate woman!!
Baaahaa My kids always bloody find it - There should be a law!
Besides you can snicker all ya like but I got the chocolate now !
Hey "chocolate coated pee" Good god you nut you've just put me off my bloody chocolate!!
I hate ya!
Pee'od
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Holy f*ck! Chocolate coated firefighters?
Clear out sister,...I'm cummin for them! LMAO
Gonna have to give them a good tongue lashing.
Mmmmm. LOL
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Hahaha Choc coated Pee...hadn't thought of it that way! LMAO LMAO
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LMAO - nope they are all mine mine mine mine and mine ...
Go far away and come back next year....
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Hang on, I AM faraway you ninny! LMAO
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Okay, next year it is.
Then I get to have them for one whole year.
They won't be in good condition on their return though...flame on baby!
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Their panting at the moment - must boost their multi-vitamin...the gossip is gonna be flying soon.
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Hey, I have some blue pills with a big V on them...
No hang on...might save them for my turn.
*smirk*
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Gossip, shmossip
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OMG I just spilled my wine you nut! Plus it went down my bloody cleavage....crap!
hmmm
Firefighters do clean ups don't they? Hey get in line girl I don't hear you having wine
spilled and no you can't have the rest of my wine - I was trying to drink it ya know...
X
Comment from rhymelord
It's not unreaznabul to be loved by anyone!!! If Tom Jones can say it that way, then so can you. Anyway, great execution etc, but it seems to me you are spending a lot of time discussing matters of FS procedures etc.. Now don't you get snotty with me, my girl.LOL
REg
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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It's not unreaznabul to be loved by anyone!!! If Tom Jones can say it that way, then so can you. Anyway, great execution etc, but it seems to me you are spending a lot of time discussing matters of FS procedures etc.. Now don't you get snotty with me, my girl.LOL
REg
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Haha...very cute Reg! I guess when FS matters piss me to tears I gotta write about 'em...this has only happened on a few occasions but its happened twice with the same person and for goodness sake, I'd had enough.
Speaking of enough, I've had enough of the procedures...and your cheek young man! LOL
Thanks Reginald
Cheers P
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Long, long time since anyone called me "young man". Does my poor old heart the world of good, it does and all.
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Well I DID know you are slightly older than me Reg, however as my mum always says...you are only as old as you feel.
Glad you're heart is feeling better. LOL
Comment from adewpearl
good abcb rhyme in stanza one and abba rhyme in the second and third stanzas, though my personal preference is to keep the same scheme
excellent use of enjambment to create good flow in your poem
I like the dialogue format
where the other person's replies are implied
a good satiric look at some of the unreasonable expectations some folks at fan story have with a message about how inappropriate their expectations are.
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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good abcb rhyme in stanza one and abba rhyme in the second and third stanzas, though my personal preference is to keep the same scheme
excellent use of enjambment to create good flow in your poem
I like the dialogue format
where the other person's replies are implied
a good satiric look at some of the unreasonable expectations some folks at fan story have with a message about how inappropriate their expectations are.
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thanks Brooke and I thought it was abab in the first with the "iew" and "ou" rhymes same. I prefer any preference that sounds good and I felt this was strong throughout. Funny though, cos I have a bit of ocd and an odd stanza wouldn't happen like that normally...perhaps I'm letting my hair down a little these days...haha
Yes some here have very unreasonable expectations but they damn well know who they are. Not come across this much but enough to piss me off and write about it recently.
Cheers P
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Comment from mikenbel
I haven't fanned you yet...but I like your point of view so I am seriously considering it... :-) I felt the poem is definitely worthy of front page status - unlike some poems that are on the front page ahead of you. So people do pay exorbitant amounts to get on the front page - which is not where they belong...but that is just *my* point of view. Again - WELL done!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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I haven't fanned you yet...but I like your point of view so I am seriously considering it... :-) I felt the poem is definitely worthy of front page status - unlike some poems that are on the front page ahead of you. So people do pay exorbitant amounts to get on the front page - which is not where they belong...but that is just *my* point of view. Again - WELL done!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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LOL I was actually going to mention PLEASE NO FANSHIPS ON THIS POST in my authors notes...then I thought, No why would I knock back a fan. However I'm glad it appealed in some way. I appreciate your pov and yes the amounts of money wasted on incoherent drivel on the front page could feed a small starving country for a year.
Cheers and thanks for a delightfully supportive review.
Phillippa
Comment from Winslow
Dear Closet Poet,
For fans love you if they love me, that is the way it goes. Always be as truthful as you can and the fans will come on out.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Dear Closet Poet,
For fans love you if they love me, that is the way it goes. Always be as truthful as you can and the fans will come on out.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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LOL yep thats the way it goes for sure.
Thanks for your review.
Cheers P
Comment from Indie Skreet
lmao so I have just unfanned you. Take you or leave you? How could anyone leave you when you are 10 times better than so many on here and in so many ways - even if you do think in fact is one word cretin! lol. Will be watching the reviews on this one me little P (taker) luv it - luv you - luv a piss-taker! I know .......hard to believe, Indie xxx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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lmao so I have just unfanned you. Take you or leave you? How could anyone leave you when you are 10 times better than so many on here and in so many ways - even if you do think in fact is one word cretin! lol. Will be watching the reviews on this one me little P (taker) luv it - luv you - luv a piss-taker! I know .......hard to believe, Indie xxx
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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WTF? You're leaving?
Nahhhh, you ain't goin' ANYWHERE. LOL Thanks for your support FAN...lubbed your review and yes I do "infact" slip with that "aswell"...bad habits...really? a piss taker? Oh, verrrry hard to believe. LOL Thanks for an adorable review, just like you.
Pee
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