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Comment from Michelle Wu
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Ha ha! I like how you used random words! The rhyme was a bit strange though. Not the words just rhyme was kind of weird. Did you make up the words yourself? Great job!

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
    Thanks, Michelle

    Steve
Comment from jackpeg
Exceptional
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ABSOLUTELY! A contest winner. Ingenious wordsmithing, a clever theme, inventive rhymes, and a very tight meter. A round of loud Applauditations to every line. I'll probably share this one with friends, i.e. from my genius poet in New Zealand...

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
    Thanks so much for the warm applaudiations and the galaxy of stars.
    Steve
reply by jackpeg on 20-Nov-2012
    You are most welcome.
Comment from dogontherocks
Exceptional
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Very well done Kiwi:
Your creative skills are only surpassed by your sense of humor. In other words you are either a creative humorist or a hilarious creator. Regardless, you are quite the talent.

Well done.

Dave

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
    Dave, thanks so much for the high praise and the six stars - appreciated.
    Steve
Comment from Joy Graham
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You didn't just create one new word you created several. I love each one of them and I even love the fact that you have a real honest to goodness definition for them. Awesome!!! I can see why you won this contest :) Well done!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thanks, Joy.
    I love having fun with words so this was right up my alley.
    Steve
Comment from Cornelius2000
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A clever poem, full of funiation. Anyone who can use "verboflutant" in a sentence and get away with it is alright with me. Here's hoping you don't aboothilated in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Nope, I was applaudiated for being so contestful.
    Steve
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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This is an ingenious creation. I loved all the new words and even more I loved your explanations. The syllables worked out perfectly and gave the whole thing a lyrical feel. Great job. Giddy

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Giddy, thanks for the kind words and the six stars.
    Steve
Comment from Deniz22
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Congratulations on your win! Excellent work and awell deserved win!

Congratulations on your win! Excellent work and awell deserved win!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
    Steve
Comment from Dan Diego
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Light, whimsical and a definite contest contender.

The narrator creates six new words in a contest that asks for one. That's six times the fun.

The poem takes a few jabs at the FS community, all in good fun.

All the words are in the proper order and I didn't have to pause for any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors.

Great entry.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thanks, Dan - yes, managed to sneak a win with this one.
    Steve
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Ha ha - I just love words,
but that certainly is a new
one on me, Steve - a great
entry for the contest...
good luck to you, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thanks, Margaret - I guess we are nearly all word-lovers here and I have always enjoyed 'playing' with them.
    Steve
Comment from RYME4U
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Very funny and well written. I love the humor and the beautiful made up words. You have chosen great artwork, too. Good job

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thank you!
    Steve