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DEW

Clarity Pyramid Poem

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Comment from angel123
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Your nature poem about Dew is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice is excellent.

Angel123

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Thank you so much for the kind review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your well-written poem vividly describes a very specific, eye-catching nature scene. Effective use of alliteration and simile

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Thanks Janice. I love dew and spider webs.
Comment from WilliamDeen
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Your Clarity Pyramid Poem, Dew, is well written with a perfect syllable form for a clarity pyramid poem. Your poem is lovely. I love the description of dew as glittering diamonds!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    THank you so much, William.
reply by WilliamDeen on 13-Jul-2012
    You got my vote!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Hugs
Comment from ennahanid
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Your Clarity Pyramid writing prompt entry - Dew - is excellent, a nice gentle piece. Your picture enhances the words beautifully. It was a pleasure to read this one today - Dinah

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
    Thank you so much, Dinah
Comment from skye
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I love the image of those dew drops in the early morning.
Excellent use of this form to send a message.
Great choice of art.
Very well done.
Good luck in this inspiring contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you, this review means a great deal to me. This is exactly the imagery I was trying to portray.
Comment from Meta~Mark
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the picture illustrates these words perfectly..Dawn's early dewdrops Dangle from spider webs ..dont get tangled up in this web..excellent job!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thanks so much Mark, I appreciate your words.
Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the Clarity Pyramid
Excellent descriptive detail that creates a pretty picture
lovely use of imagery
and I really like all the alliterative D words :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
    Thank you Brooke!
Comment from heyjude
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mystery author, wonderful clarity poem that goes along
with the picture. You did a great job of writing it.
You described the picture and dew very well. Good luck
in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
    Thank you so much. I do love dew
Comment from Melspoems
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I love this clarity paramid describing dew with great imagery and good use of alliteration.
Does diamonds have 3 syllables? If not I think you need an extra syllable in that line.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
    Diamonds does - as I have checked it out twice. Though I know phonetically it doesn't seem to
Comment from lynnhartz
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Excellent description of dew in the morning. You do really well with the "short stuff"! I enoy the pictures that are added to emphasize your story.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
    I love the short "stuff" and thank you for the wonderful review
reply by lynnhartz on 11-Jul-2012
    Can't wait to read more. I'd love to see what you could do that would be kid related! They could be memorizing your work.