Squash
Two quatrains with rhyme20 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I'm sorry to be so far behind--we were re-ended on Sunday, but doing well today. I enjoyed your eye-catching title and rhyming quatrains. I hope you start to feel well enough to think about trying the sport again. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
I'm sorry to be so far behind--we were re-ended on Sunday, but doing well today. I enjoyed your eye-catching title and rhyming quatrains. I hope you start to feel well enough to think about trying the sport again. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and generous review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Don't think so.
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I feel proud when I take a walk or practice tai chi! Sports will have to be for the younger set! lol -J
Comment from Maureen's Pen
You've penned this well Ine.
You let the reader know your love of it and how it made you feel.
Nicely done overall.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
You've penned this well Ine.
You let the reader know your love of it and how it made you feel.
Nicely done overall.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and generous review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Cumbrianlass
It's a very high energy sport. My mum used to play a lot. I tried it a couple of times, but quite frankly sucked at it. Two good quatrains here, my friend. Well done. I love your diversity of subject in your poetry. You really provoke discussion.
Av
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
It's a very high energy sport. My mum used to play a lot. I tried it a couple of times, but quite frankly sucked at it. Two good quatrains here, my friend. Well done. I love your diversity of subject in your poetry. You really provoke discussion.
Av
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Gives me and my readers some variety, so I don't get bored.
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You're never boring! x
Comment from Doc Holiday
Sounds like you used to play squash a lot.
I think its similar to racketball, not sure though.
I have played that game. Very fast-paced!
It does relieve a lot of stress!
Well-written poem.
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
Sounds like you used to play squash a lot.
I think its similar to racketball, not sure though.
I have played that game. Very fast-paced!
It does relieve a lot of stress!
Well-written poem.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes I used to.
Comment from Bobbi22
I have never played squash but it does look like the kind of sport where one can release some anger or tension. Your poem describes it very well.
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
I have never played squash but it does look like the kind of sport where one can release some anger or tension. Your poem describes it very well.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Certainly does.
Comment from AprilShower
Anger certainly can give us problems if not controlled. Squash certainly should help when you hit that ball as hard as you can. "To improve again, I'd give a dime." Is that all? LOL. Good poem, Ine.
April
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
Anger certainly can give us problems if not controlled. Squash certainly should help when you hit that ball as hard as you can. "To improve again, I'd give a dime." Is that all? LOL. Good poem, Ine.
April
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
i used to play squash
but i don't play it now
since acquiring the weight
of a well pregnant sow!
-but i can squash!
very nicely penned and
presented, Dutchess Ine.
thank you for sharing.
love and squashy hugs, xxx, prince eph.
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
i used to play squash
but i don't play it now
since acquiring the weight
of a well pregnant sow!
-but i can squash!
very nicely penned and
presented, Dutchess Ine.
thank you for sharing.
love and squashy hugs, xxx, prince eph.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Joker.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Robina,
very good short poem of you telling us how you loved to paly squash you sound like a very athletic lady.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
Hello Robina,
very good short poem of you telling us how you loved to paly squash you sound like a very athletic lady.
Gert
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Used to be.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Nice look at how life used to be. Squash is one game that is too fast.
I like the idea of it regulating anger, it certainly gives it a focus.
Nice layout and artwork
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
Nice look at how life used to be. Squash is one game that is too fast.
I like the idea of it regulating anger, it certainly gives it a focus.
Nice layout and artwork
hugs
kate
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes, will never play it again, but loved it.
Comment from MizKat
Robina - Your poem is great!!! I've never heard of squash before or seen it played. Is it like tennis? I wasn't much into sports. Kat
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Robina - Your poem is great!!! I've never heard of squash before or seen it played. Is it like tennis? I wasn't much into sports. Kat
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. A bit like tennis, but faster and in an enclosed area and the racket is smaller.