'What's All That White Stuff?
Something strange has happened!12 total reviews
Comment from writeapoem
I absolutely love your mouse stories and especially this one about first time snowing. In my youth we were to poor for a sled so instead we used a aluminum trash lid. We made angels in the snow even when it lingered in the cold made an igloo and camped out in it all night. Your poems on the little creature you feature in prose ought to go viral. Thanks for sharing all the best and God Bless
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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I absolutely love your mouse stories and especially this one about first time snowing. In my youth we were to poor for a sled so instead we used a aluminum trash lid. We made angels in the snow even when it lingered in the cold made an igloo and camped out in it all night. Your poems on the little creature you feature in prose ought to go viral. Thanks for sharing all the best and God Bless
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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How I wish they would, my friend, that would be amazing. I am so pleased you are still enjoying my little mouse stories, thank you so very much for reading them and for giving this one a 6 star award. You are so kind. :) Sandra xsx
Comment from adewpearl
Strong rhyming couplets
good consonance of hard C sounds in looked at the clock and blinked
good alliteration in mumbling and moaning
Vivid descriptive detail of setting and a fun reaction to the snow by the mice
I like the proximate rhyme of toast/coats
A most delightful poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2012
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Strong rhyming couplets
good consonance of hard C sounds in looked at the clock and blinked
good alliteration in mumbling and moaning
Vivid descriptive detail of setting and a fun reaction to the snow by the mice
I like the proximate rhyme of toast/coats
A most delightful poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for this review, Brooke. I really do appreciate your kind comments. xsx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Aww, I like the idea of a snowmouse. :-) It's fun to see the reaction to snow from beings who have never seen it, to remind us we didn't always moan about what a hassle it could be!
This chapter is fun and I imagine kids will smile and laugh along with the mice as they play in it. :-)
(And I don't mind snow as long as it stays in The Hedgerow Capers. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Aww, I like the idea of a snowmouse. :-) It's fun to see the reaction to snow from beings who have never seen it, to remind us we didn't always moan about what a hassle it could be!
This chapter is fun and I imagine kids will smile and laugh along with the mice as they play in it. :-)
(And I don't mind snow as long as it stays in The Hedgerow Capers. :-)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for this review, Sue! I am really pleased you still like my little stories, your reviews mean such a lot. xsx
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, this is one of my favorites so far. The fact that these are composed in six verse stanzas with the rhyming couplets.
Everything, every verse flows easily and very well.
I am so glad we found each other's poetry. All that you do, seems to come easily for you.
Keep up the great work. This is very well done and love the artwork,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Sandra, this is one of my favorites so far. The fact that these are composed in six verse stanzas with the rhyming couplets.
Everything, every verse flows easily and very well.
I am so glad we found each other's poetry. All that you do, seems to come easily for you.
Keep up the great work. This is very well done and love the artwork,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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What a lovely thing to say, Jim! Thank you so much! Yes, I also am so pleased to have found yours, you write such brilliant poems. I find some styles very difficult to understand, but yours are always a pleasure. Thank you again, Jim xsx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
AW, Thats so cute. snow mouse?
Oh Sandra, you did it again!
Your poems are so delightful.
I really enjoy every one.
Thank you for sharing. Honeycomb
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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AW, Thats so cute. snow mouse?
Oh Sandra, you did it again!
Your poems are so delightful.
I really enjoy every one.
Thank you for sharing. Honeycomb
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I do look forward to reading your reviews, Honeycomb, thank you for this one, you always pu asmile on my face,thank you xsx
Comment from Gungalo
A super write in that it causes children to laugh. Imagine all the little ones with smiles on their faces. Oh year, they love to hear of snow.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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A super write in that it causes children to laugh. Imagine all the little ones with smiles on their faces. Oh year, they love to hear of snow.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Don't they just!! We all moan about it, but they love it. Thanks, Gungalo for another lovely review!
Comment from eberry4
Great flow to your poem. I thouroughly enjoyed this read. The delight of the mice is very cute and just made me smile. A thrilling poem for a child.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Great flow to your poem. I thouroughly enjoyed this read. The delight of the mice is very cute and just made me smile. A thrilling poem for a child.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I am so pleased you enjoyed this one too, eberry4, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my stories! xsx
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your welcome
Comment from misscookie
I like your Ptrose/ poerm about the little mouse seeing snow for the very first time. Ity must had be a real surprise.
Jusi=tlike me reading your poem. There is never a dull moment in your story. thank you for sharintg a cheerfull story.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I like your Ptrose/ poerm about the little mouse seeing snow for the very first time. Ity must had be a real surprise.
Jusi=tlike me reading your poem. There is never a dull moment in your story. thank you for sharintg a cheerfull story.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for that lovely compliment, my friend! It's nice to know you still enjoy them! xsx
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Your verywelcome.Have a nice Sunday.
Comment from LilHippie
How thoroughly delightful!! Oh, I loves the way you write for children. If my book winds up being half this good I will be so happy. You must love children very much, as I do. This is precious. The wonder and amazement they feel seeing snow for the first time. What a wonderful feeling to capture in print. Every child can identify with that, and every adult also. At the end they will build a snowhouse. Just precious and so well written. Thank you very much for this gift for children.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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How thoroughly delightful!! Oh, I loves the way you write for children. If my book winds up being half this good I will be so happy. You must love children very much, as I do. This is precious. The wonder and amazement they feel seeing snow for the first time. What a wonderful feeling to capture in print. Every child can identify with that, and every adult also. At the end they will build a snowhouse. Just precious and so well written. Thank you very much for this gift for children.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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What a wonderful review and what a wonderfull thing to say! I thank you so much, LilHippie, for your very kind comments! xsx
Comment from l.raven
OH I love this one. but I love snow. So very well written. My grandkids love reading these. I am so glad Timmy and Tommy loved the snow, and the whole family got to play in it. Kids can't wait for the next one. Great write and I have no stars. ******
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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OH I love this one. but I love snow. So very well written. My grandkids love reading these. I am so glad Timmy and Tommy loved the snow, and the whole family got to play in it. Kids can't wait for the next one. Great write and I have no stars. ******
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much! Such a lovely review, and lovely things to say, I truly and pleased you liked it, thank you! xsx