Comment from prodigal

Excellent

I was in the mood for a good laugh, so I checked the seal of quality under humour. It led me to this wonderfully written limerick. Very well done- Sam

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much Sam! Limericks are such fun, eh? xoxoxoxxoxo

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

it has perfect limerick inflection, which some found hard to do- it is extremely funny, and the humor is risque, which is typical for limericks - well done, Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Thanks so much Brooke! Looking at the comments in the voting booth, it appears a lot of voters are quite offended by the risque factor, which is surprising given that limericks are, as you say, laden with witty bawdiness! I've read quite a few before having a go at this one and 90% are very risque indeed! Again, thanks so very much my friend xooxoxoxo

reply by adewpearl on 23-Jan-2009

never underestimate the sophistication of many of the people at FS :-)

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Yes, it always pays to err on the side of caution methinks ... sometimes!

Comment from saw3152

Excellent

Nicely done! I loved the implied story and the image brought a smile to my face. Good limerick humor -- Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Thanks so much saw3152! xoxoxoxoxo

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

You've done a smashing job here, especaially for a first stab at a limerick. Great flow and rhyme and a clever theme with humor. Great job. Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Thankyou MM very much indeed. Love, Ms Confusement xoxoxoxox

Comment from Nomar Chagrin

Excellent

For a first stab at limericks, you've stabbed very well, Paca. All the mechanics are there as well as the wit and humor.

~ Rhein

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Aw, thanks so much Rhein. First goes are always a bit nerve-wracking, but I feel much better now! xoxoxoxoxo

Comment from Fleedleflump

Exceptional

That's officially the only contest entry thus far that's actually made me laugh out loud. It's in the proper tradition, and I like the additional rhymes littered throughout. You have my vote, Ms Alpaca.

Mike

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

Thanks so very much indeed Mike! Your very encouraging words and your vote are very much appreciated xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Oops! When you fiddle with the wrong people, life changing things can happen. I can't believe this is your first limerick. This is hilarious. When you said Russell, I immediately thought of Russell Crowe! What a great contest entry. Best of luck with this Andy-Mandy rhyme. It is a winner! Blessings to you, Linda

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2009

One should always be careful who one fiddles with, eh? Funny, I never thought of Mr Crowe, but our own Russel Chale sprung to mind strangely enough! thanks so much, as always Linda, for your encouragement. But methinks yours will carry the banner; it's a beauty! xoxooxoxo

Comment from Russel Chale

Excellent

LOL. I looked at this contest but nothing limericky came to mind. I'm currently distracted with longer stories and back to work blues. Good luck Mylady of Limerick.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009

Good ole' back to work blues ... can't say I miss them really; though sometimes I'd like to escape being dumped with those jobs no-one else has the time for (or doesn't want to do)! Thanks so much my friend; glad you enjoyed my first limerick xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo PS: Mylady ... I like the sound of that ...

Comment from joan marie

Excellent

I love limericks. Don't write them often but this is going to be one hard contest to vote on. I plan on reading this one. Great entry. joan marie

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009

Thanks so much Joan! Another first for me, and the competition's gonna be fierce methinks .. xoxoxooxo

reply by joan marie on 21-Jan-2009

Methinks ye are right! jm

Comment from Curt Mongold

Excellent

Good Lord, I hope I don't flex the wrong muscle! LOL!
Great entry into the contest Chris! Very funny and written in the format well for your first!
Best wishes,
Curt

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009

Thanks Curt! Gives me an idea for the next Naughty Bits contest ... xoxoxoxoxo