My Book of Favored Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Suppressive Need"My collection of various sonnets.
25 total reviews
Comment from Graceheart
How very sad yet so touching and beautiful.. You have a way of pulling at the reader's heartstrings with your compelling passions! Again and again your tender strokes softly allure the reader's emotions! Really loved this one!!!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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How very sad yet so touching and beautiful.. You have a way of pulling at the reader's heartstrings with your compelling passions! Again and again your tender strokes softly allure the reader's emotions! Really loved this one!!!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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If you read no others after this, you must read "My Prayer to Thee". I know you will understand where I'm coming from. Thank you so much darling man. Sent you an email to that address you gave me. *kiss*
Comment from dportwood
Dawn of Tomorrow,
Applause to you for this accomplishment of the very pleasing sonnet style and the presacribed rhyming pattern. Kind of a lost love type message.
Good poetry and good luck in the contest.
Duane
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2008
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Dawn of Tomorrow,
Applause to you for this accomplishment of the very pleasing sonnet style and the presacribed rhyming pattern. Kind of a lost love type message.
Good poetry and good luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 08-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2008
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Thank you for your wonderful words. Yes the contest is on unrequitted love.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
your poem is very good, it is well writen and well presented. it is easy to read and follow. the flow is good. there are no amendments needed
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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your poem is very good, it is well writen and well presented. it is easy to read and follow. the flow is good. there are no amendments needed
Comment Written 07-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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Thank you, much appreciate your time to read and review.
Comment from Pitt
Lovely! What gets me, is the fact that you even wrote like our old poets (I don't mean in age, I mean because they have lived long ago). This is not a criticism, on the contrary. Not many people can do that. Maybe you should develop that as one of your styles.
I love the line: "Now in the end my sanguine dream must bleed".
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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Lovely! What gets me, is the fact that you even wrote like our old poets (I don't mean in age, I mean because they have lived long ago). This is not a criticism, on the contrary. Not many people can do that. Maybe you should develop that as one of your styles.
I love the line: "Now in the end my sanguine dream must bleed".
Comment Written 07-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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Actually this is one of my styles. It's the more modern voice that I struggle with, go figure. Muse must be from back in the day...thanks for your wonderful words of review.
Comment from SunlitWhisper
Well I know this probably is stated so darn much but I think you have penned a very lovely sonnet. I myself do not know a lot about the sonnet. I just wrote my first one last week (I hope), but anyway your sonnet is a beautiful read and shows so much tenderness and the rhymes are not forced.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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Well I know this probably is stated so darn much but I think you have penned a very lovely sonnet. I myself do not know a lot about the sonnet. I just wrote my first one last week (I hope), but anyway your sonnet is a beautiful read and shows so much tenderness and the rhymes are not forced.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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I will have to check it out. I love to write sonnets and rondeaus another form that I'm very fond of. Thank you for your time, much appreciated.
Comment from joan marie
I is interesting that writers have to explain their forms. The last site I used had a section with tons of forms. Although, here it is much more professional. The flow was excellent and I was carried easily along. Great read. joan marie
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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I is interesting that writers have to explain their forms. The last site I used had a section with tons of forms. Although, here it is much more professional. The flow was excellent and I was carried easily along. Great read. joan marie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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I think writer's chose to explain them more than anything else. So many don't know and since this is for a contest for that type of writing it's important that they know. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, much appreciated.
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I agree, I only mentioned it because the other site not as comprehensive. Would be great to have list with definitiions and samples so we could try new things not just in contests. But I do agree with what you said.jm
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There is a site called shadowpoetry and it has such a list, that is where many of us go to find things like this to try out. That is where I learned of the Rondeau and now that form is one of my favorites to write in. You might find it a useful tool.
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I found FARP Fantasy Art Resource Project which I used to explain and Ethere to a woman. Check it out has lots of other stuff and I think most is free.l will definitely check out the one your mentioned. Thanks, jm
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I found FARP Fantasy Art Resource Project which I used to explain and Ethere to a woman. Check it out has lots of other stuff and I think most is free.l will definitely check out the one your mentioned. Thanks, jm
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I found FARP Fantasy Art Resource Project which I used to explain and Ethere to a woman. Check it out has lots of other stuff and I think most is free.l will definitely check out the one your mentioned. Thanks, jm
Comment from Peter@Poole
Oh, what a beauty, Jo Lynn! I just love its plangent lament. Your words are well chosen and your images finely drawn. Perhaps because I always write about a real love, I felt that you did too, but I'm not prying. Peter
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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Oh, what a beauty, Jo Lynn! I just love its plangent lament. Your words are well chosen and your images finely drawn. Perhaps because I always write about a real love, I felt that you did too, but I'm not prying. Peter
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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No, not prying, you're right. Almost everything that comes from my pen is based on reality. Thank you for feeling that. Hugs, JL
Comment from Jean Lutz
The form is great. The message is sure to resonate with anyone who has loved -- and lost. Your art choice is in harmony with the words -- in shades of brillance and muted shades of dark. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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The form is great. The message is sure to resonate with anyone who has loved -- and lost. Your art choice is in harmony with the words -- in shades of brillance and muted shades of dark. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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Thank you Jean, glad you could pick up on the different expressions in that art work like I did. Much appreciate your comment.
Comment from wierdgrace
this is so emotional and so wonderful at the same time, i wishing you all the luck in the contest, the artwork is perfect for the words, I havent seen the contest so do not know much, but I love the structure and the images thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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this is so emotional and so wonderful at the same time, i wishing you all the luck in the contest, the artwork is perfect for the words, I havent seen the contest so do not know much, but I love the structure and the images thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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Thank you, very much appreciate your lovely words of review.
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u rso welcome
Comment from Artasylum
this is so beautiful...i haven't been brave enought to try this style but you have done it exquisitely right down to the presentation...the words were glorious...yours, diana
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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this is so beautiful...i haven't been brave enought to try this style but you have done it exquisitely right down to the presentation...the words were glorious...yours, diana
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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Thank you, Diana, appreciate your time. Try one, they are kind of a challenge.
