Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Frustration"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
12 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent addition to your NaPo project. You are coming right along and this has lots of expressions of emotions of the more unpleasant kind that can indeed form part of growing up, and even extend into elder years.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Excellent addition to your NaPo project. You are coming right along and this has lots of expressions of emotions of the more unpleasant kind that can indeed form part of growing up, and even extend into elder years.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Gloria thanks for your comments and six star rating! Dove
Comment from artisart4u
As one would say, correction makes you a better person. You don't realize this as a child but you see what a person was trying to tell you later on.
You have a good list of what causes frustration.
I like your picture, font, and colors.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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As one would say, correction makes you a better person. You don't realize this as a child but you see what a person was trying to tell you later on.
You have a good list of what causes frustration.
I like your picture, font, and colors.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi artisart4u thanks for your comments and your six star rating! Dove
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That's sad it was your experience. This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The message is relatable. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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That's sad it was your experience. This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The message is relatable. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Alex thanks for your comments and review. Wishing you all the best Dove
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You're welcome, Dove!
Best wishes too!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and nice presentation, Dove.
-I think you described a lot of adolescents.
-There seems to be cycles we go through
in this time of our life.
-The feelings of "but you don't understand"
and also feeling criticized.
-A good poem. Continued success with
NaPoWriMo.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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-Good image and nice presentation, Dove.
-I think you described a lot of adolescents.
-There seems to be cycles we go through
in this time of our life.
-The feelings of "but you don't understand"
and also feeling criticized.
-A good poem. Continued success with
NaPoWriMo.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Pam thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are welcome, Dove.
Comment from jessizero
This background color is really harsh on the eyes. The font color doesn't stand out too well from the background, as well. However, it is a very good poem, and I liked the picture with it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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This background color is really harsh on the eyes. The font color doesn't stand out too well from the background, as well. However, it is a very good poem, and I liked the picture with it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi jessizero thanks for comments and review i will try to fix font and background colors Dove
Comment from Harry Craft
Such a cool poem on such a real subject that we all must deal with at sometime in our lives. Frustration can be a very nagging thing in life for most of us. The photo goes well with the poem too.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Such a cool poem on such a real subject that we all must deal with at sometime in our lives. Frustration can be a very nagging thing in life for most of us. The photo goes well with the poem too.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Harry thanks for comments and review Dove
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You are so welcome!
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna!
My thought is that if you bold your text in yhis presentation, it will lend more emphasis to your words. Nice job with all the alliteration in this poem.
Kim
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Hi Donna!
My thought is that if you bold your text in yhis presentation, it will lend more emphasis to your words. Nice job with all the alliteration in this poem.
Kim
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Kim thanks for comments and review Donna
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh yes, those characteristics of adolescence are very relatable! You skilfully complement the eye-catching visual with some punchy reminders in pleasing alliteration. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Oh yes, those characteristics of adolescence are very relatable! You skilfully complement the eye-catching visual with some punchy reminders in pleasing alliteration. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Debbie thanks for comments and review Dove
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem really shares that feeling of frustration so well! The short lines are perfect. I think they make the emotion stand out. I can feel the intensity of everything going wrong. It's easy to relate to! Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Your poem really shares that feeling of frustration so well! The short lines are perfect. I think they make the emotion stand out. I can feel the intensity of everything going wrong. It's easy to relate to! Great job!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Michael thanks for comments and review Donna
Comment from royowen
Yes, children are like sponges they absorb a lot as a child, but it's so important as to what they actually absorb, the need for a child to grow up with a good self image is more important than anything, I know, I've raised two girls, beautifully written, Donna, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Yes, children are like sponges they absorb a lot as a child, but it's so important as to what they actually absorb, the need for a child to grow up with a good self image is more important than anything, I know, I've raised two girls, beautifully written, Donna, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Roy thanks for comments and review Donna
