Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Farewell to Winter"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
14 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I was hoping go put my boots away this weekend. It snowed this morning! I will be glad to kiss winter goodbye. But he's dragging his feet. I enjoyed your hopeful post though.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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I was hoping go put my boots away this weekend. It snowed this morning! I will be glad to kiss winter goodbye. But he's dragging his feet. I enjoyed your hopeful post though.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi June thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from dragonpoet
HI Dovemarie
This nicely done cinquain shows a lovely sentiment that I wish was true. It seems like every time a little green shows, a little more snow comes. I can't wait until snow is totally out of the forecast. It should be soon, but there has been snow on Mother's Day here occasionally.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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HI Dovemarie
This nicely done cinquain shows a lovely sentiment that I wish was true. It seems like every time a little green shows, a little more snow comes. I can't wait until snow is totally out of the forecast. It should be soon, but there has been snow on Mother's Day here occasionally.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Joan thanks for your comments and review Dove
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No problem, Marie.
Joan
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi well said. It is not that I hate winter, it had not been so bad this season but the cold and the changesin temperature affect old people easily.specially at night when heating has gone and temperature drops. On the other had I would prefer Spring and Summer. There is more freedom more latitude.
Good write though.
Benny
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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Hi well said. It is not that I hate winter, it had not been so bad this season but the cold and the changesin temperature affect old people easily.specially at night when heating has gone and temperature drops. On the other had I would prefer Spring and Summer. There is more freedom more latitude.
Good write though.
Benny
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi benny thank you for your comments and review Dove
Comment from zanya
Winter's departure(hurrah) is effectively portrayed here in fine detail especially in 'Green patches appearing,' isn;t it wonderful to get a 'taste' of the new season?
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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Winter's departure(hurrah) is effectively portrayed here in fine detail especially in 'Green patches appearing,' isn;t it wonderful to get a 'taste' of the new season?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi zanya thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Beautiful chapter for your book. I love the description you give of cold, sharp, pinprick rains! I get goosebumps just reading that and can picture the exact feeling that comes with those rains! thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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Beautiful chapter for your book. I love the description you give of cold, sharp, pinprick rains! I get goosebumps just reading that and can picture the exact feeling that comes with those rains! thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Marilyn thank you for your comments and review Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna!
Your cinquain poem is in perfect syllable count. I truly hope it is your last snow. We are still snowing here. It seems we are both writing of snow today!
Kim
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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Hi Donna!
Your cinquain poem is in perfect syllable count. I truly hope it is your last snow. We are still snowing here. It seems we are both writing of snow today!
Kim
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Kim! thanks for your comments and review Donna
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
We just had some snow where I live yesterday. Some places in the state had an accumulation but not where I live. Spring doesn't usually show up here until the end of April beginning of May. I like how you describe the rain. It is so true that the drops are sharp. Enjoyed the read. Hopefully spring will finally be there for you.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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We just had some snow where I live yesterday. Some places in the state had an accumulation but not where I live. Spring doesn't usually show up here until the end of April beginning of May. I like how you describe the rain. It is so true that the drops are sharp. Enjoyed the read. Hopefully spring will finally be there for you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Kirsten Thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-It makes me cold thinking of snow;
however, temperatures haven't been spring like.
-A well written cinquain with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, along with alliteration.
-A very good line describing the rain.
-Good opening and closing lines, as well.
-Best wishes for Napowrimo.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-It makes me cold thinking of snow;
however, temperatures haven't been spring like.
-A well written cinquain with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, along with alliteration.
-A very good line describing the rain.
-Good opening and closing lines, as well.
-Best wishes for Napowrimo.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Pam thanks for your comments and review and best wishes for the contest
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Harry Craft
A great photo to set this poem off with and I enjoyed reading the poem and the photo is awesome too! We all hope for summer to come soon! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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A great photo to set this poem off with and I enjoyed reading the poem and the photo is awesome too! We all hope for summer to come soon! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Harry thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are so welcome!
Comment from RodG
I can truly appreciate how much you welcome Spring and applaud Winter's retreat. Seeing those "green patches" Will put a smile on anyone's face. I liked the how you begin and end your poem with LAST, to emphasize finality. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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I can truly appreciate how much you welcome Spring and applaud Winter's retreat. Seeing those "green patches" Will put a smile on anyone's face. I liked the how you begin and end your poem with LAST, to emphasize finality. Rod
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Rod thanks for your comments and review Dove
