Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Danger Within!"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Danger Within, has the proper formatting and reminds all the readers who have a fear of barking dogs, or the teeth they bare, that the bite is worse than the bark.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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This poem, Danger Within, has the proper formatting and reminds all the readers who have a fear of barking dogs, or the teeth they bare, that the bite is worse than the bark.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Bill thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fearsome dogs can be very scary and unpredictable and they can sometimes escape from gardens and attack people. My daughter was attacked this way once and feared for her life. A horror story indeed here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Fearsome dogs can be very scary and unpredictable and they can sometimes escape from gardens and attack people. My daughter was attacked this way once and feared for her life. A horror story indeed here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Dolly i hope your daughter recovered from the attack. thanks for comments and review Donna x x
Comment from royowen
Fortunately for me I have never faced a collection of dogs, or even more than one, I've been bitten a couple of tomes, and it can be rather painful. Thanks for sharing this interesting post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Fortunately for me I have never faced a collection of dogs, or even more than one, I've been bitten a couple of tomes, and it can be rather painful. Thanks for sharing this interesting post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Roy thanks for comments and review Blessings Donna
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Most welcome
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice poem, and I can see how many fear dogs, especially guard dogs.
Suggestions only:
As I passed by the fence,
My body felt so tense
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As I passed by the fence,
My body began to tense
Cross the street
These creatures you do not want to meet!
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Cross the street
Quickly, move your feet.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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This is a very nice poem, and I can see how many fear dogs, especially guard dogs.
Suggestions only:
As I passed by the fence,
My body felt so tense
-or-
As I passed by the fence,
My body began to tense
Cross the street
These creatures you do not want to meet!
-or-
Cross the street
Quickly, move your feet.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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hi lancellot, thanks for commenys, review and suggestions. i went in and edited Dove
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such a fun feeling! I really enjoyed how you used sound. The way you play with the words makes it feel like I'm right there - hearing those snarls and growls. The poem flows nicely. I couldn't help but smile at how you keep the energy going with every line. Keep it up, you've got a great style!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Your poem has such a fun feeling! I really enjoyed how you used sound. The way you play with the words makes it feel like I'm right there - hearing those snarls and growls. The poem flows nicely. I couldn't help but smile at how you keep the energy going with every line. Keep it up, you've got a great style!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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hi Michael thanks for your comments and review Donna
