Cat's Adventure
Cat's Adventure10 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a true sucker for happy endings; although, it seems, they don't happen often in real life. And for the cats and parrots to celebrate together, it really makes for a successful adventure. No, flying fur and feathers.
Thanks for sharing.
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I'm a true sucker for happy endings; although, it seems, they don't happen often in real life. And for the cats and parrots to celebrate together, it really makes for a successful adventure. No, flying fur and feathers.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It is always good to work together. I enjoyed reading the skit and the message. Thank you for sharing.
(The cats push the raft into the water and begin paddling. The parrots pause their fighting to watch the cats.)
Narrator: "With the raft ready, the ocean cats push off from the shore, paddling towards the open sea. The parrots, momentarily distracted, watch the explorers with curiosity." (This is redundant.)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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It is always good to work together. I enjoyed reading the skit and the message. Thank you for sharing.
(The cats push the raft into the water and begin paddling. The parrots pause their fighting to watch the cats.)
Narrator: "With the raft ready, the ocean cats push off from the shore, paddling towards the open sea. The parrots, momentarily distracted, watch the explorers with curiosity." (This is redundant.)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for taking time to review this piece and for the suggestions.
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Iza, how ai wish this story could be transcribed intro the real world. Corporation and teamwork to meat a common goal is always to be preferred. Bless you. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Yes, Iza, how ai wish this story could be transcribed intro the real world. Corporation and teamwork to meat a common goal is always to be preferred. Bless you. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Hi Ulla from your lips to God's ears, as they say:)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written and very well organized script and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a lovely day and a very good week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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This is a very well written and very well organized script and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a lovely day and a very good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much Pat for taking the time from your precious day and listen to this script.
Comment from Begin Again
Hurrah, Iza! I see you've returned to the cats' adventures and this time added a few extra characters like the narrator and of course, the parrot. A good lesson of teamwork and friendship was woven within your words. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Hurrah, Iza! I see you've returned to the cats' adventures and this time added a few extra characters like the narrator and of course, the parrot. A good lesson of teamwork and friendship was woven within your words. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Yup, just in script form for now. I need to sit on my computer at home to continue the gang adventure:) with Miss Pudding and the romanian chicos:)
Comment from royowen
Wow, it looked a little bit hairy for awhile with Captain Whispers and his entourage of Paws and Tails, and the parrots too, and the storm soon abates, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Wow, it looked a little bit hairy for awhile with Captain Whispers and his entourage of Paws and Tails, and the parrots too, and the storm soon abates, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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I tried to keep it simple to be more addaptable for a kids.
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Well dine Iza
Comment from lyenochka
It's fun to see your adorable cats on another adventure!
I see you have a more traditional play with a narrator who helps bring the story together. Hooray for cats and parrots who work together and keep everyone safe!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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It's fun to see your adorable cats on another adventure!
I see you have a more traditional play with a narrator who helps bring the story together. Hooray for cats and parrots who work together and keep everyone safe!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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I tried to make it more realistic for a screenplay:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Instead of three men in a boat, you have four cats on a raft here Iza. You made me smile with your inventive dialogue here, an entertaining post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Instead of three men in a boat, you have four cats on a raft here Iza. You made me smile with your inventive dialogue here, an entertaining post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much Ms. Dolly:)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved the excitement in your writing! The characters are so full of life. The unexpected twist with the parrots helping the cats during the storm was great. That really highlighted the theme of teamwork and friendship that I felt reading this. I had a blast reading this - keep up the amazing work! It's a fantastic story full of heart!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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I loved the excitement in your writing! The characters are so full of life. The unexpected twist with the parrots helping the cats during the storm was great. That really highlighted the theme of teamwork and friendship that I felt reading this. I had a blast reading this - keep up the amazing work! It's a fantastic story full of heart!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much Mr. Michael, your words of encouragements are so inspiring:)
Comment from jessizero
I was going to say that this seems a bit childish, but I see now that it was your intention. You did a great job! I think this would be well-liked by children. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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I was going to say that this seems a bit childish, but I see now that it was your intention. You did a great job! I think this would be well-liked by children. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for giving it a try:)
