Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Rushing Stream"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
16 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Good sensory words. This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Good sensory words. This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Alex thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You're welcome, Dove!
Comment from nancyjam
A lovely descriptive Haiku for the contest. Each line places the reader in the scene. I can almost hear it rushing over the rocks.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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A lovely descriptive Haiku for the contest. Each line places the reader in the scene. I can almost hear it rushing over the rocks.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi Nancy thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, A Rushing Stream, has the proper formatting and describes the powerful force which pushes through the forest on its way to the sea way out somewhere.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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This haiku, A Rushing Stream, has the proper formatting and describes the powerful force which pushes through the forest on its way to the sea way out somewhere.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Bill thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from tempeste
Come Spring ,the sun warms up and the snow melts
and mountain streams come alive , gushing down.
Crystal clean water gurgles and jets in all directions.
I have one such stream a stone's throw away and I love to see it in all its phases.
It snakes through my pine forest..the one in your artwork looks like it flows through woods.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Come Spring ,the sun warms up and the snow melts
and mountain streams come alive , gushing down.
Crystal clean water gurgles and jets in all directions.
I have one such stream a stone's throw away and I love to see it in all its phases.
It snakes through my pine forest..the one in your artwork looks like it flows through woods.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi tempeste thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
One of my favorite scenes in nature and I have a place here in Maine that looks almost identical that I used to love to hike to. Your description is accurate and has me feeling the spray from that cold water. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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One of my favorite scenes in nature and I have a place here in Maine that looks almost identical that I used to love to hike to. Your description is accurate and has me feeling the spray from that cold water. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Marilyn thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Dove.
-You wrote a good nature poem.
-Effective imagery paints a good
word picture of the mountain stream
with "icy cold" and the concluding
line "spraying over rocks."
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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-Nice image and presentation, Dove.
-You wrote a good nature poem.
-Effective imagery paints a good
word picture of the mountain stream
with "icy cold" and the concluding
line "spraying over rocks."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Pam thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are welcome, Dove.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi mountain streams are always beautiful and attractive ,on the banks are sunny and I used to lounge there and enjoy it but...the water, no its icy cold as you mention and there is no touching it except watching it flashing in the sun. It is a beautiful writing ,simple saying clearly what it intended to.
Benny
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi mountain streams are always beautiful and attractive ,on the banks are sunny and I used to lounge there and enjoy it but...the water, no its icy cold as you mention and there is no touching it except watching it flashing in the sun. It is a beautiful writing ,simple saying clearly what it intended to.
Benny
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Benny thanks for your comments and review Dove
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Hi again
Benny
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna,
Traditionally, your title would be:
haiku (mountain stream)
I like that your line lengths aren't 5-7-5, but remain as a 17 syllable haiku, staying true to the form.
Kim
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi Donna,
Traditionally, your title would be:
haiku (mountain stream)
I like that your line lengths aren't 5-7-5, but remain as a 17 syllable haiku, staying true to the form.
Kim
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Kim thank you for comments and review Dove
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I can virtually feel the cool freshness of this mountain stream in your 5-7-5 verse. Both visually (flashing) and audibly (spraying), you capture the energy of its flow to complete a well-considered write. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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I can virtually feel the cool freshness of this mountain stream in your 5-7-5 verse. Both visually (flashing) and audibly (spraying), you capture the energy of its flow to complete a well-considered write. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Hi Debbie thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from royowen
There are some stunning vistas in the countries we have visited over the years, in our our country we have all the varieties one cannot experience in any other, beautifully written Nancy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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There are some stunning vistas in the countries we have visited over the years, in our our country we have all the varieties one cannot experience in any other, beautifully written Nancy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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hi Roy thanks for your comments and review I'm not Nancy I'm Donna
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Sorry Donna
