Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Midnight Tsunami"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
8 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there is so much pain and hopelessness here , like some one affected by depression. You need to be Halley . What has happened , whatever , needs to be forgotten and march ahead with strength. Think of Easter ,think of Jesus.
I hope this writing is only a poem not real.
Benny
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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Hi there is so much pain and hopelessness here , like some one affected by depression. You need to be Halley . What has happened , whatever , needs to be forgotten and march ahead with strength. Think of Easter ,think of Jesus.
I hope this writing is only a poem not real.
Benny
Comment Written 22-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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hi Benny thanks for comments and review Unfortunately the writing is real but I did have a happy strenghthening Easter I hope you did too! Dove
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I am glad to hear this. Better go out and mix ,you need to unloosed your your thoughts and mind. God bless
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
It happens all the time and more often than not it happens late at night when our world is quiet except for the chattering of our inner voice. Powerful poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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It happens all the time and more often than not it happens late at night when our world is quiet except for the chattering of our inner voice. Powerful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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hi Marilyn thanks for comments and review Dove
Comment from royowen
I think that nightmares are a terrible thing, one only loses sleep over, I've been very fortunate in my life that I've had very few nightmares, but have very few dreams anyway, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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I think that nightmares are a terrible thing, one only loses sleep over, I've been very fortunate in my life that I've had very few nightmares, but have very few dreams anyway, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2025
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hi Roy thanks for comments and review Bless you too Donna
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Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
I love the metaphor comparing pain and tsunami. The poem is so sad and heartbreaking, which is what I hope was your intention. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2025
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I love the metaphor comparing pain and tsunami. The poem is so sad and heartbreaking, which is what I hope was your intention. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2025
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hi Anna thanks for comments and review Dove
Comment from lancellot
This is very emotional and moving free verse poem. I cannot tell if it is fictional or non-fiction. I hope it is fiction. I know trauma and pain can be debilitating and last for many years.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2025
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This is very emotional and moving free verse poem. I cannot tell if it is fictional or non-fiction. I hope it is fiction. I know trauma and pain can be debilitating and last for many years.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2025
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hi lancellot thanks for comments and review Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna!
I really enjoyed how you carried the tsunami metaphor relating to pain all through your cascade poem. Nice work!!
Cascades aren't always easy to pull off, so you did well.
Kim
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Hi Donna!
I really enjoyed how you carried the tsunami metaphor relating to pain all through your cascade poem. Nice work!!
Cascades aren't always easy to pull off, so you did well.
Kim
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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HiKim thanks for your comments and review Donna
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can't imagine a Tsunami happening whilst I am sleeping and you brought the scene to life here, those waves crashing over mountains sound really scary, a lively write, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I can't imagine a Tsunami happening whilst I am sleeping and you brought the scene to life here, those waves crashing over mountains sound really scary, a lively write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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hi Dolly thanks for your comments and review love Donna x x x
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, an emotional Tsumani of the torrid kind. I've had a few actually, but God saved me from them all. It was looking bad there for a while though. A relatable offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Oh, an emotional Tsumani of the torrid kind. I've had a few actually, but God saved me from them all. It was looking bad there for a while though. A relatable offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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hi Sal thanks for your comments and review x o Dove
