Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Year 25"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
17 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The message is relatable. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The message is relatable. The photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes ,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Alex thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You're welcome!
Comment from Janet Foor
I hope and pray your optimism works for you and all of us. A 25 word poem for 2025 is an excellent way to convey that message of hope and gladness to be alive in 2025.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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I hope and pray your optimism works for you and all of us. A 25 word poem for 2025 is an excellent way to convey that message of hope and gladness to be alive in 2025.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Janet thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from zanya
Yes and a poem that is filled with joy and optimism with the final two lines reminding us that life is a delightful mix of many emotions -and a great pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Yes and a poem that is filled with joy and optimism with the final two lines reminding us that life is a delightful mix of many emotions -and a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi zanya thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from evilynne
Well, yes, I think it is quite appropriate and well written. The picture of the bird is beautiful as well. We do not know what this year will find, but we hope that many good things will come our way. Evi
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Well, yes, I think it is quite appropriate and well written. The picture of the bird is beautiful as well. We do not know what this year will find, but we hope that many good things will come our way. Evi
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Evi thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from l.raven
Hi Marie, I am so looking forward to Spring
this year...the good and the bad...it would
be too boring if everyday was a good day...
always good to have diversity...
I love your poem...and love this picture
sweet girl...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi Marie, I am so looking forward to Spring
this year...the good and the bad...it would
be too boring if everyday was a good day...
always good to have diversity...
I love your poem...and love this picture
sweet girl...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi raven thanks for your comments and review Dove
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your so very welcome....love xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Dove.
-A clever idea for a poem.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines, followed
by very good examples of how
you will spend your time.
-You end the poem well by
showing that throughout the
year there varying emotions.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Dove.
-A clever idea for a poem.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines, followed
by very good examples of how
you will spend your time.
-You end the poem well by
showing that throughout the
year there varying emotions.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Pam thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
The perfect topic for a 25 word poem for your chapter book. Here's wishing you more happiness than sadness and more joy tan grief. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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The perfect topic for a 25 word poem for your chapter book. Here's wishing you more happiness than sadness and more joy tan grief. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Marilyn thanks for your comments and review Donna
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is a cleverly written poem, here is the past, jump into the present and plant the seeds for the future:"I'm glad I'm alive
In the year "twenty-five"
Creating poetry, looking forward to Spring
Future months will bring
Happiness and sadness
Grief, joy, and gladness" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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This is a cleverly written poem, here is the past, jump into the present and plant the seeds for the future:"I'm glad I'm alive
In the year "twenty-five"
Creating poetry, looking forward to Spring
Future months will bring
Happiness and sadness
Grief, joy, and gladness" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Iza thanks for your comments, review and good luck wishes Dove
Comment from royowen
I've seen each and every season so many times now, they are till different, even though the weather is similar it's not exactly the same, and nor are the people in it, and the situation, beautifully written Nancy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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I've seen each and every season so many times now, they are till different, even though the weather is similar it's not exactly the same, and nor are the people in it, and the situation, beautifully written Nancy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your comments and review Dove (or Donna)
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Sorry Donna
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, The Year 25, has the proper formatting and looks at and for the good things to happen which the future always promises to bring.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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This twenty-five-word poem, The Year 25, has the proper formatting and looks at and for the good things to happen which the future always promises to bring.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review Dove