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Rhythmical Reflections

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Year 25"
2025 NaPoWriMo contest

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a well written poem. It has good imagery and vivid descriptions. The message is relatable. The photo image presentation supports your words well.

Best wishes ,

Alex

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    Alex thanks for your comments and review Dove
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 14-Apr-2025
    You're welcome!
Comment from Janet Foor
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I hope and pray your optimism works for you and all of us. A 25 word poem for 2025 is an excellent way to convey that message of hope and gladness to be alive in 2025.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    hi Janet thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from zanya
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Yes and a poem that is filled with joy and optimism with the final two lines reminding us that life is a delightful mix of many emotions -and a great pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    hi zanya thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from evilynne
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Well, yes, I think it is quite appropriate and well written. The picture of the bird is beautiful as well. We do not know what this year will find, but we hope that many good things will come our way. Evi

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    hi Evi thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Marie, I am so looking forward to Spring
this year...the good and the bad...it would
be too boring if everyday was a good day...
always good to have diversity...

I love your poem...and love this picture
sweet girl...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    hi raven thanks for your comments and review Dove
reply by l.raven on 14-Apr-2025
    your so very welcome....love xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Dove.
-A clever idea for a poem.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines, followed
by very good examples of how
you will spend your time.
-You end the poem well by
showing that throughout the
year there varying emotions.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
    hi Pam thanks for your comments and review Dove
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Apr-2025
    You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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The perfect topic for a 25 word poem for your chapter book. Here's wishing you more happiness than sadness and more joy tan grief. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
    hi Marilyn thanks for your comments and review Donna
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This is a cleverly written poem, here is the past, jump into the present and plant the seeds for the future:"I'm glad I'm alive
In the year "twenty-five"
Creating poetry, looking forward to Spring
Future months will bring
Happiness and sadness
Grief, joy, and gladness" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
    hi Iza thanks for your comments, review and good luck wishes Dove
Comment from royowen
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I've seen each and every season so many times now, they are till different, even though the weather is similar it's not exactly the same, and nor are the people in it, and the situation, beautifully written Nancy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2025
    Thanks for your comments and review Dove (or Donna)
reply by royowen on 10-Apr-2025
    Sorry Donna
Comment from Bill Schott
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This twenty-five-word poem, The Year 25, has the proper formatting and looks at and for the good things to happen which the future always promises to bring.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
    hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review Dove