Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lonely Life"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
9 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this is a very sad write. There is everything ...all elements that make a depression story. Yes when you are disabled or handicapped ,it is very hard to mix. I wonder why why cannot people see that you need them more than they need you. It is heartbreaking, very sad.i am touched.
Benny
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Hi this is a very sad write. There is everything ...all elements that make a depression story. Yes when you are disabled or handicapped ,it is very hard to mix. I wonder why why cannot people see that you need them more than they need you. It is heartbreaking, very sad.i am touched.
Benny
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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hi Benny thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Harry Craft
A great poem about loneliness. I can truly relate to this poem as I am sure we have all had our lonely moments in life. This is such a real subject to write about. The art work is amazing too! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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A great poem about loneliness. I can truly relate to this poem as I am sure we have all had our lonely moments in life. This is such a real subject to write about. The art work is amazing too! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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hi Harry thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are so welcome Dove!
Comment from teafor2
Scribe, this alliterated title, gloomy picture, despondent theme and somber
tone is only upstaged by extremely distressing holistic verbiage...A sober
and melancholic offering for the said contest. Good luck. teafor2
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Scribe, this alliterated title, gloomy picture, despondent theme and somber
tone is only upstaged by extremely distressing holistic verbiage...A sober
and melancholic offering for the said contest. Good luck. teafor2
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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hi teafor2 thanks for your comments and review Dove
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
How sad it is to feel all alone. It does feel like being trapped in the grips of a dark beast whose claws just dig in and pull out your soul. You used amazing descriptive words. This unfortunately rings true for a lot of people. You wrote the poem very well. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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How sad it is to feel all alone. It does feel like being trapped in the grips of a dark beast whose claws just dig in and pull out your soul. You used amazing descriptive words. This unfortunately rings true for a lot of people. You wrote the poem very well. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Kristen thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I've lost a lot of friends over the years, the say that death is a part of life, and that this cycle continues throughout our youth into middle age into our final moments, well done Marie, very contemplative,, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Oh yes, I've lost a lot of friends over the years, the say that death is a part of life, and that this cycle continues throughout our youth into middle age into our final moments, well done Marie, very contemplative,, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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hi Roy thanks for your comments and review Dove
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Most welcime
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
So well done. This felt a little like the walls are closing in. "Hovering between two worlds" is such a powerful line - it says so much in just a few words. Your poem hits hard and I can feel the emotion in every line. Even in its sadness, it has a strength to it. Keep writing - your words matter!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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So well done. This felt a little like the walls are closing in. "Hovering between two worlds" is such a powerful line - it says so much in just a few words. Your poem hits hard and I can feel the emotion in every line. Even in its sadness, it has a strength to it. Keep writing - your words matter!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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hi Michael thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Lonely Life, speaks of a life lived within an insular environment, where all could hurt or be bad is kept out. Of course, the same walls keep out joy, people, and life.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This free verse, Lonely Life, speaks of a life lived within an insular environment, where all could hurt or be bad is kept out. Of course, the same walls keep out joy, people, and life.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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hi Bill, thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I hope this is not autobiographical as this is so very sad and sometimes we feel alone when we are surrounded by friends, a fine post for the contest, an emotional post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I hope this is not autobiographical as this is so very sad and sometimes we feel alone when we are surrounded by friends, a fine post for the contest, an emotional post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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hi Dolly, thanks for comments and review This unfortunately is autobio as it potrays a great deal of my life.Love Donna xxx
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I am sorry to hear that Donna, bless you x x x
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written sad poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and great artwork. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Donna, This is a very well written sad poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and great artwork. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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hi Teri, thanks for your comments and review Blessings Donna
