Hurry Back, Debbie
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like you turned a rhyming poem to a suite of Haiku. It seems to me that you need to change the form to Haiku so you can express yourself better.
We all love Debbie and wish her back soon. She is still around.
Well done.
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I like you turned a rhyming poem to a suite of Haiku. It seems to me that you need to change the form to Haiku so you can express yourself better.
We all love Debbie and wish her back soon. She is still around.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, D'Arcy Roads, covers the highpoints of Debbie and all she has done here at the Fanstorian site. It is good to rest up and come back refreshed.
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This poem, D'Arcy Roads, covers the highpoints of Debbie and all she has done here at the Fanstorian site. It is good to rest up and come back refreshed.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from Nicki.B
This is really lovely Iza. A great tribute to a lovely lady, who has graced the site with her wonderful poems and extra wonderful reviewing!
And 4 haikus to top off some lovely verses, this is fabulous! I she'll love it.
This is so thoughtful and was a pleasure to read.
Well done and best wishes
Nicki x
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This is really lovely Iza. A great tribute to a lovely lady, who has graced the site with her wonderful poems and extra wonderful reviewing!
And 4 haikus to top off some lovely verses, this is fabulous! I she'll love it.
This is so thoughtful and was a pleasure to read.
Well done and best wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this tribute to Debbie with us. I enjoy her poem and have learned a lot from her. I enjoyed reading this and I pray she does return to us very soon.
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Thank you for sharing this tribute to Debbie with us. I enjoy her poem and have learned a lot from her. I enjoyed reading this and I pray she does return to us very soon.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
I seldom to almost never give up a six for poetry, only because I'm a fiction person, and they give us so few to go around. But this is one of those times when I wish I had a and extra star to give to your very deserving post. Thanks for sharing.
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I seldom to almost never give up a six for poetry, only because I'm a fiction person, and they give us so few to go around. But this is one of those times when I wish I had a and extra star to give to your very deserving post. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from estory
It's a great celebration of one of the writers here. Everyone brings their own personality, their own style, their own experience of the world to this place, and it makes for a more colorful site. Prayers for her return. Health comes first. estory
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It's a great celebration of one of the writers here. Everyone brings their own personality, their own style, their own experience of the world to this place, and it makes for a more colorful site. Prayers for her return. Health comes first. estory
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from lyenochka
What a gorgeous set of poems you have written for Debbie d"Arcy! I know she would love this and hope she reviews this before she goes. We will miss her fabulous writing!!
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What a gorgeous set of poems you have written for Debbie d"Arcy! I know she would love this and hope she reviews this before she goes. We will miss her fabulous writing!!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Dear Iza, thank you so much for this wonderful verse! I'm not sure I deserve such accolades but I'll take them anyway:) Your presentation is beautiful and I'm truly enchanted by the kindness and thought woven through this fine, poetic tribute. Bless you, Debbie xx
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Dear Iza, thank you so much for this wonderful verse! I'm not sure I deserve such accolades but I'll take them anyway:) Your presentation is beautiful and I'm truly enchanted by the kindness and thought woven through this fine, poetic tribute. Bless you, Debbie xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
Comment from Begin Again
so beautiful and definitely true. You did a great job Iza with the tribute poem to Debie. Her biographies are always outstanding and done so well. thank you for including your thoughts in the poem.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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so beautiful and definitely true. You did a great job Iza with the tribute poem to Debie. Her biographies are always outstanding and done so well. thank you for including your thoughts in the poem.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much Carol, and in my first poem I got lost between the two Debbies:)
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It happens to all of us....they were both excellent poems for two deserving ladies. Have a great night!
Comment from royowen
Well done Iza, you've done a great job with this poem and tribute to Debbie Darcy, the ways of people that come and go aren't something that I necessarily understand but I do know that things press, and missions come to an end, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Well done Iza, you've done a great job with this poem and tribute to Debbie Darcy, the ways of people that come and go aren't something that I necessarily understand but I do know that things press, and missions come to an end, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much Mr. Roy, it was a pleasure to write this poem.
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Well done
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Well done
