The Cabin in the Woods
This is a short story of suspense5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
this was a difficult contest - or at least for me - since I am not use to writing in second person. You've done a fine job to keeping the reader in suspense until the end. Keep up the good work.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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this was a difficult contest - or at least for me - since I am not use to writing in second person. You've done a fine job to keeping the reader in suspense until the end. Keep up the good work.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Ah, thank you. It was interesting in writing In the second person point of view. I voted for your story in the contest.
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thank you so much, Kristen. I do appreciate your support. I thought I was suppose to get notified of your posts, but something must have gone wrong. I'll do it again. Don't give up!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was such a fun story The way you built up the tension had me on edge - especially when the laptop kept shutting off - such a great touch! The twist at the end was perfect and made me smile after all the suspense. Your story really plays with the idea of fear in such a clever way. Great job keeping the suspense high and the ending unexpected!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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This was such a fun story The way you built up the tension had me on edge - especially when the laptop kept shutting off - such a great touch! The twist at the end was perfect and made me smile after all the suspense. Your story really plays with the idea of fear in such a clever way. Great job keeping the suspense high and the ending unexpected!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Lol well I definitely did not see that coming. I was convinced there was a killer in the cabin typing on the computer. Good job keeping the twist unknown til the end. I got a chuckle.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Lol well I definitely did not see that coming. I was convinced there was a killer in the cabin typing on the computer. Good job keeping the twist unknown til the end. I got a chuckle.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Nice, I'm glad you got a laugh out of it. Thank you for your review
Comment from patcelaw
This is where we're at and I enjoyed listening to it with the exception of the F Word. May you have a wonderful day and then you also have a terrific week and may God bless you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This is where we're at and I enjoyed listening to it with the exception of the F Word. May you have a wonderful day and then you also have a terrific week and may God bless you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I guess I should have put a language warning on it. sorry about that.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Maybe this post should be written in the first person because I was wondering who (you) was throughout? Did you mean (I)? A scary story Kirsten, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Maybe this post should be written in the first person because I was wondering who (you) was throughout? Did you mean (I)? A scary story Kirsten, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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IT's for a contest written in second person point of view. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
