Hurry Back, Debbie
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "We Never Say Goodbye"Debbie D'Arcy is leaving
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Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
I am speechless
Such a great piece filled with longing, well wishes, and hope. I hope Debbie saw this. I am sure she appreciates it!
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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I am speechless
Such a great piece filled with longing, well wishes, and hope. I hope Debbie saw this. I am sure she appreciates it!
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Dear Anna, thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Yes, Debbie reviewed this and she loved it. She said she was -- "in bits after reading." She will appreciate your kind words as well. Thank you so much for stopping by.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Love your poem. It is such a heartfelt poem for Debbie. I'm going to miss her poems. I like the fact that you put we never say goodbye in the poem. It seems so final. I like the words you put throughout the poem. Great writing, Brenda
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Love your poem. It is such a heartfelt poem for Debbie. I'm going to miss her poems. I like the fact that you put we never say goodbye in the poem. It seems so final. I like the words you put throughout the poem. Great writing, Brenda
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Dear Brenda,
Thank you for the wonderful review of my poem and for your kind words for Debbie. I'm sure she will treasure them.
Sending along my very best.
Sally :))
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a very caring and thoughtful poetic message to Debbie, acknowledging her departure while looking forward to her return. Goodbye sounds so final, but "Take care, I'll see you later," shows hope for the future. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to Debbie. We will surely miss her, and look forward to her return.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is a very caring and thoughtful poetic message to Debbie, acknowledging her departure while looking forward to her return. Goodbye sounds so final, but "Take care, I'll see you later," shows hope for the future. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to Debbie. We will surely miss her, and look forward to her return.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Dear Lorraine, thank you for the lovely review and kind words for Debbie. I know she will treasure them. I'm with you and many others: we hope to see her sooner than later, but -- we'll never say goodbye.
All my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is an excellent way to celebrate a lovely friend, whom we hope to see again. I love the repetition of, 'We never say goodbye', its effect in the poem is magical in driving home the message of the poem. Thanks so much, dear Sally, for sharing your thoughtful poem. Remain blessed, my good friend.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is an excellent way to celebrate a lovely friend, whom we hope to see again. I love the repetition of, 'We never say goodbye', its effect in the poem is magical in driving home the message of the poem. Thanks so much, dear Sally, for sharing your thoughtful poem. Remain blessed, my good friend.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Dear Esostine,
Thank you for the lovely review of my poem and for your kind words for Debbie. I'm sure she will treasure them.
Sending along my very best today as always.
Sally :))
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi Saly, thank you so much for sharing this tribute to Debbie, I particularly resonate with this one:"Though you travel
to a place unknown,
or plan a new adventure
with treasures to find.
No doubt there's a Heaven
filled with stars and moon
and reflections of your kind." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Hi Saly, thank you so much for sharing this tribute to Debbie, I particularly resonate with this one:"Though you travel
to a place unknown,
or plan a new adventure
with treasures to find.
No doubt there's a Heaven
filled with stars and moon
and reflections of your kind." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Dear Iza, thank you for the lovely words and kind stars. Mostly, thank you for joining in to bless Debbie as she goes.
Blessings back to you too.
Sal Xoxo
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Sal,
This is a very beautiful poem for Debbie. It is full of emotions that the reader can feel. She is a great person and will missed until she returns.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Sal,
This is a very beautiful poem for Debbie. It is full of emotions that the reader can feel. She is a great person and will missed until she returns.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Dear Cecilia.
Thank you so much for the lovely review of my poem for Debbie. I’m sure your heart felt words will be a tonic for her.
Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Harry Craft
Such a cool way to send off a friend who is leaving, but saying that you will see them again. The photo is awesome too and goes well with the poem. The rhyming scheme is great too. Keep up the excellent work!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Such a cool way to send off a friend who is leaving, but saying that you will see them again. The photo is awesome too and goes well with the poem. The rhyming scheme is great too. Keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem for Debbie D' Arcy, We Never Say Goodbye. Debbie will cherish your kind words.
Blessing, Harry!
Sal :))
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You are so welcome Sally!
Comment from Carol Clark2
I like that you're not saying 'goodbye,' and I hope Debbie isn't saying it either. I do hope she will be back with us soon, writing her lovely biographical poems. The repetitions are lovely, and drive home the point effectively. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I like that you're not saying 'goodbye,' and I hope Debbie isn't saying it either. I do hope she will be back with us soon, writing her lovely biographical poems. The repetitions are lovely, and drive home the point effectively. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Dear Carol, Thank you for the lovely review of my poem for Debbie. I’m sure your kind words will be a tonic for her.
Blessings always,
Sal Xoxo
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a delightfully written poem to say goodby, but not goodby to one of the most gifted poets on FanStory. I will miss seeing her poems - so informative, so poetically correct, and so interesting.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This is a delightfully written poem to say goodby, but not goodby to one of the most gifted poets on FanStory. I will miss seeing her poems - so informative, so poetically correct, and so interesting.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Dear Verna, Thank you so much for the beautiful review of my poem for Debbie. I’m sure your heart felt words will fly to her heart.
Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Sal.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very good opening to the poem.
-The next verse is very good about
"a new adventure
with treasures to find."
-A very good closing verse.
-A very nice tribute for Debbie;
she will be missed, but hopefully
she'll come back when the time is right.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Sal.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very good opening to the poem.
-The next verse is very good about
"a new adventure
with treasures to find."
-A very good closing verse.
-A very nice tribute for Debbie;
she will be missed, but hopefully
she'll come back when the time is right.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my tribute to Debbie D'Arcy. She will hold your kind words within her heart.
Blessings,
Sal :))
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You are very welcome, Sal. She is a very special person, as are you.