I in the Alphabet Soup
Iggy the Iguana16 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Imaginary friends are great things to have. Imagine them the way you want them and hide all the faults and flaws and personality disorders that prick like thorns. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Imaginary friends are great things to have. Imagine them the way you want them and hide all the faults and flaws and personality disorders that prick like thorns. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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That's probably why I write about ghosts...they make me happy and we can do whatever we want, whenever we want... Imagination is a wonderful world to enjoy. Thanks as always, my dear friend. Now, imagine a cool drink. a huge steak, and a special friend at your side... a special blend to make you feel better soon.
Hugs, Carol
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That would be wonderful! But three drinks would be better. :-) Hugs, Ric
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Dealers choice! The winning hand is yours!
Take care of yourself and know you can always drop a line or two without reading any of my stories. Miss you!
Comment from Karen Cherry
Very very good. Great crisis for her save. Sometimes circumstances put us right where we need to be. This will be a good kids book. I was writing one and I ran out of steam early. But I am sticking with the common sense, I just need a breather now and then. I have a new story I am posting tomorrow. Today I have to earn points to promote it. Karen
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Very very good. Great crisis for her save. Sometimes circumstances put us right where we need to be. This will be a good kids book. I was writing one and I ran out of steam early. But I am sticking with the common sense, I just need a breather now and then. I have a new story I am posting tomorrow. Today I have to earn points to promote it. Karen
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another fantastic alphabet soup story. Kids are so cruel sometimes. Ivy didn't think twice to help the boy out of his predicament. Great moral to the story.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
Another fantastic alphabet soup story. Kids are so cruel sometimes. Ivy didn't think twice to help the boy out of his predicament. Great moral to the story.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great story! I like that Ivy jumped into action when Carter was hanging by his backpack strap. And of course, Iggy helped also. Two fixes: 'Staring at the monstrous building looming in front of her, (Ivy)....' 'By the time (Ivy) reached the classroom....'
I especially like that Carter passed Ivy a juice box and Zane sat beside her in art. Good details that show the change in the boys toward Ivy. Blessings. Carol
P.S. I just read this to my grandson, and he liked your story.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Great story! I like that Ivy jumped into action when Carter was hanging by his backpack strap. And of course, Iggy helped also. Two fixes: 'Staring at the monstrous building looming in front of her, (Ivy)....' 'By the time (Ivy) reached the classroom....'
I especially like that Carter passed Ivy a juice box and Zane sat beside her in art. Good details that show the change in the boys toward Ivy. Blessings. Carol
P.S. I just read this to my grandson, and he liked your story.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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First of all, thank your grandson for enjoying the story. It makes me feel good. Secondly, thanks for catching my errors..seems these eyes and brain fail me more and more each day. I appreciate the help. Thank you as always,
Carol
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Kaleb says, "Thanks for writing the story!"
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So sweet!
Comment from Wendy G
Good on Iggy, helping her to overcome her fears and the bullying. Sometimes we all need an imaginary friend to help us to be brave to stand up for ourselves. (Pity the teacher didn't take a stand against her students' misbehaviour and mocking of Ivy. Sorry, I know it's just a story, but I would not have allowed them to do that.) very well written.
Wendy
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Good on Iggy, helping her to overcome her fears and the bullying. Sometimes we all need an imaginary friend to help us to be brave to stand up for ourselves. (Pity the teacher didn't take a stand against her students' misbehaviour and mocking of Ivy. Sorry, I know it's just a story, but I would not have allowed them to do that.) very well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
This cute and clever story had several messages to build character and bravery in young children. The story would also capture and hold a child's attention as they hoped Ivy would be accepted by kids in her new school. The best part is....the story has a very happy ending.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This cute and clever story had several messages to build character and bravery in young children. The story would also capture and hold a child's attention as they hoped Ivy would be accepted by kids in her new school. The best part is....the story has a very happy ending.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Iggy and hooray for Ivy for helping when she didn't really have to but she knew it was the right thing to do! I enjoyed this story as you showed us some real life lessons mingled with imagination!
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Hooray for Iggy and hooray for Ivy for helping when she didn't really have to but she knew it was the right thing to do! I enjoyed this story as you showed us some real life lessons mingled with imagination!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
You're a genius Carol, this is another great kiddy's story with a moral to it, we all have qualities to us, if they are discovered, and they can be when we are young, although raising kids is complex issue, but even in tithe most negative arena, what we decide is still a decision, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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You're a genius Carol, this is another great kiddy's story with a moral to it, we all have qualities to us, if they are discovered, and they can be when we are young, although raising kids is complex issue, but even in tithe most negative arena, what we decide is still a decision, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
I like Iggy, he is a cool dude, Carol.
I used to keep lizards, never had an Iguana , had a beardy, a chameleon and a family of 4 European jeweled lizards.
I wont mention that I also had 7 rather large snakes as well. My room was a herpetologists heaven LOL
Now all my companions have fur.
Tim x
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I like Iggy, he is a cool dude, Carol.
I used to keep lizards, never had an Iguana , had a beardy, a chameleon and a family of 4 European jeweled lizards.
I wont mention that I also had 7 rather large snakes as well. My room was a herpetologists heaven LOL
Now all my companions have fur.
Tim x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written story about an iguana and I'm very much enjoyed listening to. It flows very well when it's read aloud and you have used very good sense structure and paragraphing. May you have a lovely day at Mary have aThis is a very well written story about an iguana and I'm very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud and you have used very good sense structure and paragraphing. May you have a lovely day and Mary have a traffic weekend. Patricia
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This is a very well written story about an iguana and I'm very much enjoyed listening to. It flows very well when it's read aloud and you have used very good sense structure and paragraphing. May you have a lovely day at Mary have aThis is a very well written story about an iguana and I'm very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud and you have used very good sense structure and paragraphing. May you have a lovely day and Mary have a traffic weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
