H in the Alphabet Soup
Hank Loves Mud13 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm still not reading much, maybe a few of those who post really short pieces, since I read in about 15 minutes intervals. I got a kick out of this, being a kid at heart. And of course my wayward imagination doesn't always see what you're saying, like "Hank grunted and splashed a little deeper into his puddle." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I'm still not reading much, maybe a few of those who post really short pieces, since I read in about 15 minutes intervals. I got a kick out of this, being a kid at heart. And of course my wayward imagination doesn't always see what you're saying, like "Hank grunted and splashed a little deeper into his puddle." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I've missed you and your smile, but especially your big heart and kind words. I always know I can count on you to lift my spirits. So many are leaving FanStory and it's sad. I hope you begin to feel better soon because I can't wait for you to come out to play. Take care and I think of you often.
Hugs, Carol
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I've thought about leaving Fanstory for the last couple of years now myself. But I'd miss you and a few others terribly. Now I'm just hoping I can get back playing more. Hugs back at ya! Ric
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I'll be watching for you...rain or shine!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a cute story that should appeal to boys and girls. Hank loved his mud, but his friends thought he would never have a girl friend if he was always muddy. Penelope loved being clean and dressed to dance, but that mud did look like fun. She wasn't afraid to try it out herself, and she did like it. Good story idea because quite a few kids are afraid to try things, and this is encouraging without it being a dangerous thing to try.
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This is a cute story that should appeal to boys and girls. Hank loved his mud, but his friends thought he would never have a girl friend if he was always muddy. Penelope loved being clean and dressed to dance, but that mud did look like fun. She wasn't afraid to try it out herself, and she did like it. Good story idea because quite a few kids are afraid to try things, and this is encouraging without it being a dangerous thing to try.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from Karen Cherry
One day hopefully everyone will realize that aside from the fact that one has an innie and one has an outie, they are the same. They can do the same things,They can like the same things. And, on the other hand we can also be completely different. Ain't life grand? Good story. Karen
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One day hopefully everyone will realize that aside from the fact that one has an innie and one has an outie, they are the same. They can do the same things,They can like the same things. And, on the other hand we can also be completely different. Ain't life grand? Good story. Karen
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
You write the best stories. This one is really cute with the girl hippo playing in the mud with Hank. It's love at first sight. No one can deny it, even his friends were surprised.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
You write the best stories. This one is really cute with the girl hippo playing in the mud with Hank. It's love at first sight. No one can deny it, even his friends were surprised.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute hippo love story. Kids would like this, especially all the mud play. They'd also like that Larry can burp the alphabet -- a fun detail. I like that Penelope is not afraid to get her tutu muddy. Hugs & smiles. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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This is a cute hippo love story. Kids would like this, especially all the mud play. They'd also like that Larry can burp the alphabet -- a fun detail. I like that Penelope is not afraid to get her tutu muddy. Hugs & smiles. Carol
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thanks again for enjoying Hank the Hippo. Just posted one of Juno the Jellybean Elephant...Hope you like it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A little romance! Everyone needs a bit of love, including a young hippo. I am pleased he found a girlfriend to keep him company. The others were friends but he needed one of his own kind. Lovely story.
Wendy
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A little romance! Everyone needs a bit of love, including a young hippo. I am pleased he found a girlfriend to keep him company. The others were friends but he needed one of his own kind. Lovely story.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
I read this cute and quaint little story to my wife, She observed, it was like a lot of the stories in our childhood, but adaptable to the characters of the kids that we once played with. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
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I read this cute and quaint little story to my wife, She observed, it was like a lot of the stories in our childhood, but adaptable to the characters of the kids that we once played with. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
This made me smile big time, Carol.
I was caught out by not 2 choice ending, but in some ways, I preferred that.
It meant I could enjoy the story in the way you felt it was best.
I enjoy both types, I guess.
Tim x
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This made me smile big time, Carol.
I was caught out by not 2 choice ending, but in some ways, I preferred that.
It meant I could enjoy the story in the way you felt it was best.
I enjoy both types, I guess.
Tim x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
lol How cute was that?! Hank should never speak for a woman. Even one in a pink tutu. Had a smile all the way through this one. Well done as always, Carol.
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lol How cute was that?! Hank should never speak for a woman. Even one in a pink tutu. Had a smile all the way through this one. Well done as always, Carol.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was lovely. Some humans like to wallow in mud, so I'm not surprised that Penelope liked it. Hippos' do like the mud. And it's good for their complexion. (and ours, apparently.) H was a goodie, my friend. I really enjoyed it. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Aww, that was lovely. Some humans like to wallow in mud, so I'm not surprised that Penelope liked it. Hippos' do like the mud. And it's good for their complexion. (and ours, apparently.) H was a goodie, my friend. I really enjoyed it. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I hope a late thank you is worth as much as one on time... I always appreciate your time and your thoughts concerning my posts. I just can't seem to keep up.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
